Sunday, July 19, 2009

vacation plan


My summer vacation plan
I have a lot of plan about my summer vacation. First, I am going to go to the sea with my university friends. I love the sea and my friends, so it is looking forward for me!! But, I must be on a diet. Now, I have a hard time losing weight.
Next, I am going to go to fireworks in Tamana. My friend’s Hanako live in Tamana, so I and my friend’s Asami will stay her house. Fireworks in Tamana is very big festival, so I can not wait that!!
I have a lot of plan, above all thing, I am looking forward to travel to Europe with Misaki!! We are going to visit “Korea, England, French, Switzerland, Garman”. Our plan has many sightseeing about world heritage. Especially, Louver is the most diversion for me!!
I will remark this travel’s impression!!

9902+146=10048words

BR-14

The Lion in Love ・・・from Aesop’s Fables
I read Aesop’s Fables for the first time. This story is so sad. I can not forget about woman’s parents. They are so terrible!! This Lion is very truth and gentle, so they ought to forgive that he and their daughter’s marriage. I think that obediently, gentle and sincerity is the most important, so I can not understand about woman’s parents thought.
Aesop’s Fables has a lot of famous story. For example, The Fox and the Grapes, The Goose with the Golden Eggs, The Lion and The Mouse and so on. The Lion and The Mouse is a good story. Aesop’s Fables has a lot of cruel story, but The Lion and The Mouse is happy story. Aesop’s Fables story is so short at any story so I feel this story is easy to read to even little child. If I chance that I would like to read more stories.

9742+160=9902 words

movie


Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince

I watched about “Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince” the first day this movie was released with Asami. I was very very looked forward to this movie. I am a fun of Harry Potter. In previous work, Sirius was dead, it is soooooo sad thing for me, but this time, that person of consequence was dead!!!!! I cried while watched this movie.

I felt that this time, love scene is too much. In addition, of you did not read the books, you will not understand clearly. Compare with the books, a lot of part was shaved. But it is so powerful!! The last scene all the time kept me in suspense.

This series, next story is the last. I already read the books, but I feel impatient the next movie.

96061369742

Saturday, July 18, 2009

BR-13

Alli Baba and the Forty Thieves
Do you know this story? My answer was “No”. but, maybe you know about this phrase “Open Sesame”. In Japanese “Hirake Goma”.
This story is thieves story, on the way, this contain about cruel scene. And then, content is a little difficult me. Especially, the scene about Morgiana sewed together Cassim’s body is so barbarous for me. But probably, whoever know about “Open Sesame” , so it is probe about this story’s popularity. This story is have about read value by you!


9518+88=9606

BR-12


The Snow Queen
I read “The Snow Queen”. That is a new story to me. It is written about truth, love and so on. I was very moved!!. Heroin’s Gerda is very pure and lovely girl. Seriously mind about worrying for Kai is so impressive. She go to the river putting on her favorite shoos to exchange between Kai to her favorite shoos, this scene was very stroked me. Kai’s mind is caught by The Snow Queen. Gerda go to adventure to save Kai. The last scene, she save he that she use her tear, I think that this idea is so grate. Maybe, if you read this story you will feel warm. Do try it!

9402+116=9518

BR-11


Puss in Boots
I read “Puss in Boots”. I heard this books title, but I had not read that. Story was so unique. Head was helped many times by cat. This cat is very smart, so I was so surprised. This cat cheat many people. Thanks to this head got happy life, but I think that this head did not work heard to do, so it is but thing. I feel this story is dear to dream. But it is fiction story and not to hard to read, so maybe it is loved many people. If I can speak to animal, I would like to speak my pretty dog.!!

9293+109=9402

essay1-03b

Lilo and Stitch

Maybe, all most all the man has family. There are numerous type of family, like there are each of the man. But, how many people deliberate about that they always feel thankful for their family?

Lilo is a little girl. She lives in Hawaii. Sad to say, her parents were dead, so she lives with her older sister. Her name is Nani. Lilo likes image, so she always imagination. But she has no friend. She is always alone. While, Stitch is an alien. He was made by Janba who he is a genius scientist. Stitch did nit know about love, so he destroys everything that he thought.

Trigger of they met was Lilo’s older sister if Nani thought about having a pet on account of Lilo because she always alone. But saying Stitch is a cute dog is physically impossible. Because he is so fierce, add, he destroys anything. But as times go, he gradually come to kind. So he learned about love, friendship, kindness and family by spending a lot of times with Lilo. Stitch could learned about many important things by her.

Stitch say “Lilo is Ohana” in this film. “Ohana” is a ward in Hawaii. This means is family. I think about that we have to cherish own family, because we spend with family at any time. Of course, happy time, then, sad time, sink time, tear time, laughing time and every time we beside with own family. I feel family is my best understand person. I think that family is a small society. We must learn a lot of things from living with family. For example, many kinds of rules, moral, social, money, etiquette, cooking, cleaning and so on. We can grow up thanks to live with family.

Recently, we often encounter the family’s crimes. It is so pity thing. I think about that they should more talk their family before do such a thing. I think that communication is the most important thing about human’s life. We never can make good friendship without communication. Because, human can not understand about other person’s thought no matter it is family. Family is irreplaceable. I believe that family is always ally with you. We should not hurt your family.


This movie will teach us about precious family, in addition to, landscape is also highlight. Hawaii’s views so beautiful, sea, tree, flower and every nature are looks very cheerful. So if you watch this movie, you will get energish. Maybe you will learn a lot of things by “Lilo and Stitch”

8868+425=9293

essay 1-02b

Japan has a lot of university. Now, the majority student goes on to the university in Japan. Department is also variously, for example, medical, the Faculty of Literature, science, engineering, language, education, commerce, economy, agriculture, legal and so on. So, we can choose the department of any department you like. In university, we can learn more special knowledge.

Recently, many universities are forming some unique department. It looks so interesting. If I can reenter, I would like to sightseeing department, because maybe in this department teach us of a lot of countries culture, manner, sight and so on. Don’t you think about sightseeing is so interesting?

Sad to say, different from other world college student’s study style, Japanese college student have to study so hard to enter the university (what is called war of examination), so when we have enter the university, we feel big liberation and almost do not study hard. Therefore, generally speaking, college students are foolish. My part-time job is cram school teacher of high school student. Looking of them, I feel they do hard study more than university student.

Now, what we have to do college student in Japan? I think that we ought to do more positively. If we do more voluntary, maybe take place active society. College student are so young, but, we have judgment degree all ours’ own. I think that we should be interested in anything, and try earnestly. In addition, we should use time more effective. I feel that university student have a lot of time more any other generation. Time is money!!! We ought to spend fulfill time, and it is also important to have a lot of precious memories. We must watch myself end, and thinking variously future. If every college students do one’s best, Japanese future will bright.

My university life is full so so. When I was high school student, I so want to do play cheerleading, because my sweet friend prayed that it looks so pretty and fantastic, but my high school has not cheerleading club. Therefore, I was looking forward to play cheerleading in university, but KGU had not this club. I possibly play that, so I constitution cheerleading club. Now we practice with Tokai University and the team a member of society. Practice with Tokai University is very fun, while, society team’s practice is very hard. In February, I took part in Japan Cup held in Tokyo. Sad to say, our team lost, but I got precious experience. Concern about study, I reasonably hard to study. I like English absolutely, so I like about any classes. Recently, I am interested in Hemingway’s works. I think Farrell to arms is masterpiece. I would like to read a lot of works written by Hemingway, Shakespeare and so on. My recommendation is “King Lear” and “ Othello” . These works were written by Shakespeare. They are the one of the big 4 tragedy. If you have not read yet, you try to read these works.

The last, I think that pray is the one of the important for university students. A s it things turned out, enjoying is the most important about human’s life. Because of university life, so we have to enjoy greatly. But, be careful about fail credits.

8325+543=8868

Friday, July 17, 2009

1-01b

To the Host Family

Hallo!! My name is Maki K. Please call me Makky. I’m so happy seeing you. First, I’m introducing myself. Please listen. I’m from Japan. Japan is nice to live in, because almost all the Japanese are very kind and I feel they cherish human relations, so I was helped by many people everyday. Then, I think that Japan is the most safety country.

I have four people family, my father and mother and brother and dog. We often go to restaurant. My father is very gentle for us absolutely also to our cute dog. He go around with dog every morning. Then, he is well-informed person. My mother is so necessary for me!! I consult with her everything about me. She gives perfect advice for me all the time. Then, I feel that my mother’s dish is the most delicious. Especially, I love pizza made by my mother. We often do shopping. But, I and her liking are difficult, so our opinion sometimes crossed. My brother is a growing child, so his appetite is so big. I and he is very friendship. We have fight not at all. My mother and my father lives in perfect harmony. They often have date. Last, we have a sooo cute dog. His mane is Chara. He is 11 years old, so he is senior dog. I love my family.

Then, I have many hobbies. For example, playing the piano, nail art, cooking, watching movies, shopping and so on. Now, I live alone, so I cooking almost all the everyday. My favorite movie is “legally blonde” Do you know this? Heroine’s Elle is sooo positive and glamorous. She is my dream. I think that this movie’s success and Cinderella story is dream for almost girls all over the world. The other day, I watched “ Harry Potter~ a half blood prince” with my best friend. It was so exciting movie. I recommend for you.

Last, actually, I’m a cheerleader. Now, I am a captain in my university cheerleading club. We entered the Japan Cup in winter. Sad to say, we team lost this meeting, but I got a lot of things. I think that I had precious experience. Cheerleading is so fantastic sports, because it gives cheerful a lot of people of course I am also given cheerleading. My team often cheers about J-reag soccer, F-1 super GT, festival and so on. So this time, I want to study and practice American cheerleading.

My introduce fin. If you have some questions, please ask me at any time.

Then, in reverse, may I ask you some questions? In America, I heard that you hold a home party at every weekend. Is that true? I do want to join. In Japan, we have our mother’s cooking. Have you a special cooking about your mother?

Then, please tell me taboos. I don’t know in detail about American culture. Oh! I forget about one important thing. Do you have any family rule? If you have that, teach me. I’ll try to obey. Six weeks is very short for me, but I hope that this opportunity make it for me. Please give me wonderful experience.

7795+530=8325words

Tuesday, July 14, 2009

BR-10


Cinderella

This time, I read Cinderella. Maybe, this story is loved all of the girls. This story is famous for the Disney movie, but I was surprised about read this book. Because, story’s content is so different from Disney movie. In Disney movie, Cinderella’s father was dead, but in this book, he is alive. I thought that if her father is alive, he should protect Cinderella!! Then, I was also surprised about this story’s cruelty. Especially, her sisters cut off her foot finger or heel is very barbarous!! But, the last scene is so fantastic. I think that this is the royal road about love story.

7689+106=7795wards

Monday, July 13, 2009

BR-9


OBAMA’S SPEECH

I read The Speeches Of Barack Obama’s book. This book is so interesting for me. In addition to, this book has Obama’s speech CD, it is very useful. Because, using the CD is benefit for studying English students.

Especially, I was impressed in this book was track 35. in this page, Obama said to gratitude to his family. If my daddy or my husband say that things, I will more love him. I think about that he never forget about gratitude of everybody is one of the point of his victory.

This book contains variously his background. I think reading and listening about speech of person of consequence are very important things. This book is so easy to read and listen. I recommend this book. Try it!!


7560+129=7689wards

Sunday, July 12, 2009

essay1-03a


Lilo and Stitch
Maybe, all most all the man has family. There are numerous type of family, like there are each of the man. But, how many people deliberate about that they always feel thankful for their family?

Lilo is a little girl. She lives in Hawaii. Sad to say, her parents were dead, so she lives with her older sister. Her name is Nani. Lilo likes image, so she always imagination. But she has no friend. She is always alone. While, Stitch is an alien. He was made by Janba who he is a genius scientist. Stitch did nit know about love, so he destroys everything that he thought.

Trigger of they met was Lilo’s older sister if Nani thought about having a pet on account of Lilo because she always alone. But saying Stitch is a cute dog is physically impossible. Because he is so fierce, add, he destroys anything. But as times go, he gradually come to kind. So he learned about love, friendship, kindness and family by spending a lot of times with Lilo. Stitch could learned about many important things by her.

Stitch say “Lilo is Ohana” in this film. “Ohana” is a ward in Hawaii. This means is family. I think about that we have to cherish own family, because we spend with family at any time. Of course, happy time, then, sad time, sink time, tear time, laughing time and every time we beside with own family. I feel family is my best understand person.

Recently, we often encounter the family’s crimes. It is so pity thing. I think about that they should more talk their family before do such a thing. Family is irreplaceable. I believe that family is always ally with you. We should not hurt your family.

This movie will teach us about precious family, in addition to, landscape is also highlight. Hawaii’s views so beautiful, sea, tree, flower and every nature are looks very cheerful. So if you watch this movie, you will get energish. Maybe you will learn a lot of things by “Lilo and Stitch”

348+7212=7560wards

Thursday, July 9, 2009

BR-8


British life
This book was very interesting, so this book taught me a lot of British culture. Especially, I was surprised thing is concerned about marries. This thing is so different from Japan. Compare with Japan, divorce rate, single mother or father’s rate and not be married rate are very high, in addition, many people rising their children, but children’s parents is not married. I do not know that things is good.
Then, I was interested in making about scone. I love scone so much, but I did not know about scone was born is British. Especially, I like maple scone. I would like to make that someday.
7104+108=7212wards

BR-7


Marie-Antoinette
I think that she is the one of the most tragic woman in the world. Her mother is Maria Theresa. She is the person that jolted over history. She is also concerned in for 7 years war and so on. They lived Austria. This country had fight to Garman, because they want to get Silesia too mach.

Marie got married with Luis 16. This marriage was a political marriage so, I do not think that her life was happy. Maybe, she has a lot of stress things about for her life. Not knowing this thing was true, there is regent story that so big stress made her hair white for only a night.
Eventually, Marie and Luis 16 were killed with French revolution. What did she think the moment about her killed? I hope that she felt happy a little.


6963+141=7104wards

Wednesday, July 8, 2009

Portfolio for Writing III

Student ID: 08122
[Please replace "08122" (above) with
the last five digits of your student number
(without quotation marks). Then delete these remarks.]

Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1A OR 1C

[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).


1.1. Showcase

Short titles with links to blog posts

Dates
yyyy.mm.dd

W

C

L

P

M

1-01a (2009.04.08)

essay

2009.4.8

6

241

-

-

-

-

1-01b (2009.04.20)

1-01b

2009.7.17

7

530

-

-

-

-

(1-01c)









1-02a (2009.06.01)

unuversity essay

2009.6.26

6

343

--

-

-

-

1-02b (2009.07.06)

essay 1-02b

2009.7.18

6

543

-

-

-

-

(1-02c)









1-03a (2009.06.29)

essay1-03a

2009.7.12

6

348

1

-

-

-

1-03b (2009.07.13)

essay1-03b

2009.7.18

6

425

-

-

-

-

Totals

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2430






Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

  • [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]



2.0. Comments

Showcase

Titles of posts with links

Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd

Numbers of words in comments

Qualities of comments**

2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*

-

-

-

-

2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*





2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*





2.4. Most comments on:

Titles of posts with link

Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd

Total number of words in comments

Qualities of comments**

2.4.1. Any one of your essays*





2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?

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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?

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2.4.2. Any of your other posts*





2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?

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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

  • I didn't know things about british marries, and we don't know about british dculture well comparing U.S.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

  • [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]

  • ....



3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase

Short titles
with links

Dates: yyyy.mm.dd

Words

Comments

Example:

Vampire Killer

2007.05.16

39

1

BR1-01

book review1

2009.6.26

144

-

BR 1-02

Book review 2

2009.6.26

163

-

BR 1-03

Book review 3

2009.6.26

94

-

BR 1-04

Book Review 4

2009.6.26

150

-

BR 1-05

BR-5

2009.7.2

125

-

BR 1-06

BR-6

2009.7.2

101

-

BR 1-07

BR-7

2009.7.9

141

-

BR 1-08

BR-8

2009.7.9

108

1

BR 1-09

BR-9

2009.13

129

-

BR 1-10

BR-10

2009.7.13

106

-

BR 1-11

BR-11

2009.7.18

109

-

BR 1-12

BR-12

2009.7.18

116

-

BR1-13

BR-13

2009.7.18

88

-

BR1-14

BR-14

2009.7.19

160

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Totals:

1734



Note
: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

  • [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

Lomeo and Juliet,because it story is so impressing

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media


Showcase

Yes

No

4.1. Does your blog display an archive?

0


4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?

0


4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?

0


4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?

0


4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?

0


5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):

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  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)

0


  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")

0


  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)

0


  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)

0


  • "movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)


0

  • "brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")


0

4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?


0

  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?

    • ___ other labels attached to three or more posts

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    • Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.

      • www (n)

      • xxx (m)

      • yyy (o)

      • zzz (p)

      • ...

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4.3. Links & media

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4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?

0


  • Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?


0

  • How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics?

    • ___ posts including photos or other graphics

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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?


0

  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?

    • ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)

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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?


0

  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?

    • ___ posts including other media

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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here:

    1. ...

    2. ...

    3. ...


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  • What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yyyy.mm.dd) for reference.

    1. ... (short link, date)

    2. ... (short link, date)

    3. ... (short link, date)


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4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

  1. ...Q chan's photo about cover

  2. ...

  3. ...



5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it

Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

  • ...renweal this blog is hard to me.

  • ...I enjoyed that looking about my class mates.

  • ...



6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

  • ...next semester I should use more photo and so on.

  • ...

  • ...


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  3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).

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Thursday, July 2, 2009

BR-6


Macbeth

This work is also written by Shakespeare and one of tragedy. This is shorter than “hamlet”, “other” and “King Lear”. Story is fighting of Scotland army and Norway army.
Key persons are 3 stitches. Macbeth was trifled with these 3 stitches for a long time.
He was told by her that “ you will not be killed by man that he was born by woman’s the crotch.” But, the person that killed Macbeth was born about Caesar operation. Stitches predict were always truth in this story. I feel so sad. Maybe, I think that Macbeth was very scared about death.

6862+101=6963 wards

BR-5


THE FAERIE QUEENE

This story was written by Edmund Spenser around 1590. this is the largest romance in the Renaissance of England. I will say contents and form, in this story, there were the queen ‘Gloriana’ and 12 knights. These 12 knights fight to many witch. This tell us to truth and so on. The verse is called Spenserian stanza, quote by his mane.
This story has many old English, for example, cheere , brest and so on, in addition, not known thing that, now, if we want to make PP, we should to add ‘ed’ end the word, but that era, we should to add ‘Y’ the first the word.
This story’s verse is so beautiful. It was very difficult for me to read.

6737+125=6862 wards

weekly typing 13

Our department was planning about go to America that we will training about English skills, but new flu cause to stop this plan. We are very disappointed, because we are very looking forward to this plan. Suddenly, I have no plan.
i would like to travel a lot if courtiers, for example, Korea, America and French. if I can go Korea, I would like to shopping. Especially, I want to buy cosmetic. Then, if I can go to America, I do want to go Disney world and leangles. America looks so freedom world. The last, if I can go to French, I want to go many world heritages. For example,


6627+110=6737wards