Sunday, July 12, 2009

essay1-03a


Lilo and Stitch
Maybe, all most all the man has family. There are numerous type of family, like there are each of the man. But, how many people deliberate about that they always feel thankful for their family?

Lilo is a little girl. She lives in Hawaii. Sad to say, her parents were dead, so she lives with her older sister. Her name is Nani. Lilo likes image, so she always imagination. But she has no friend. She is always alone. While, Stitch is an alien. He was made by Janba who he is a genius scientist. Stitch did nit know about love, so he destroys everything that he thought.

Trigger of they met was Lilo’s older sister if Nani thought about having a pet on account of Lilo because she always alone. But saying Stitch is a cute dog is physically impossible. Because he is so fierce, add, he destroys anything. But as times go, he gradually come to kind. So he learned about love, friendship, kindness and family by spending a lot of times with Lilo. Stitch could learned about many important things by her.

Stitch say “Lilo is Ohana” in this film. “Ohana” is a ward in Hawaii. This means is family. I think about that we have to cherish own family, because we spend with family at any time. Of course, happy time, then, sad time, sink time, tear time, laughing time and every time we beside with own family. I feel family is my best understand person.

Recently, we often encounter the family’s crimes. It is so pity thing. I think about that they should more talk their family before do such a thing. Family is irreplaceable. I believe that family is always ally with you. We should not hurt your family.

This movie will teach us about precious family, in addition to, landscape is also highlight. Hawaii’s views so beautiful, sea, tree, flower and every nature are looks very cheerful. So if you watch this movie, you will get energish. Maybe you will learn a lot of things by “Lilo and Stitch”

348+7212=7560wards

Thursday, July 9, 2009

BR-8


British life
This book was very interesting, so this book taught me a lot of British culture. Especially, I was surprised thing is concerned about marries. This thing is so different from Japan. Compare with Japan, divorce rate, single mother or father’s rate and not be married rate are very high, in addition, many people rising their children, but children’s parents is not married. I do not know that things is good.
Then, I was interested in making about scone. I love scone so much, but I did not know about scone was born is British. Especially, I like maple scone. I would like to make that someday.
7104+108=7212wards

BR-7


Marie-Antoinette
I think that she is the one of the most tragic woman in the world. Her mother is Maria Theresa. She is the person that jolted over history. She is also concerned in for 7 years war and so on. They lived Austria. This country had fight to Garman, because they want to get Silesia too mach.

Marie got married with Luis 16. This marriage was a political marriage so, I do not think that her life was happy. Maybe, she has a lot of stress things about for her life. Not knowing this thing was true, there is regent story that so big stress made her hair white for only a night.
Eventually, Marie and Luis 16 were killed with French revolution. What did she think the moment about her killed? I hope that she felt happy a little.


6963+141=7104wards

Wednesday, July 8, 2009

Portfolio for Writing III

Student ID: 08122
[Please replace "08122" (above) with
the last five digits of your student number
(without quotation marks). Then delete these remarks.]

Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1A OR 1C

[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).


1.1. Showcase

Short titles with links to blog posts

Dates
yyyy.mm.dd

W

C

L

P

M

1-01a (2009.04.08)

essay

2009.4.8

6

241

-

-

-

-

1-01b (2009.04.20)

1-01b

2009.7.17

7

530

-

-

-

-

(1-01c)









1-02a (2009.06.01)

unuversity essay

2009.6.26

6

343

--

-

-

-

1-02b (2009.07.06)

essay 1-02b

2009.7.18

6

543

-

-

-

-

(1-02c)









1-03a (2009.06.29)

essay1-03a

2009.7.12

6

348

1

-

-

-

1-03b (2009.07.13)

essay1-03b

2009.7.18

6

425

-

-

-

-

Totals

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2430






Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

  • [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]



2.0. Comments

Showcase

Titles of posts with links

Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd

Numbers of words in comments

Qualities of comments**

2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*

-

-

-

-

2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*





2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*





2.4. Most comments on:

Titles of posts with link

Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd

Total number of words in comments

Qualities of comments**

2.4.1. Any one of your essays*





2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?

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---

---

2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?

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---



2.4.2. Any of your other posts*





2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?

---


---

---

2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?

---

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

  • I didn't know things about british marries, and we don't know about british dculture well comparing U.S.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

  • [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]

  • ....



3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase

Short titles
with links

Dates: yyyy.mm.dd

Words

Comments

Example:

Vampire Killer

2007.05.16

39

1

BR1-01

book review1

2009.6.26

144

-

BR 1-02

Book review 2

2009.6.26

163

-

BR 1-03

Book review 3

2009.6.26

94

-

BR 1-04

Book Review 4

2009.6.26

150

-

BR 1-05

BR-5

2009.7.2

125

-

BR 1-06

BR-6

2009.7.2

101

-

BR 1-07

BR-7

2009.7.9

141

-

BR 1-08

BR-8

2009.7.9

108

1

BR 1-09

BR-9

2009.13

129

-

BR 1-10

BR-10

2009.7.13

106

-

BR 1-11

BR-11

2009.7.18

109

-

BR 1-12

BR-12

2009.7.18

116

-

BR1-13

BR-13

2009.7.18

88

-

BR1-14

BR-14

2009.7.19

160

-































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Totals:

1734



Note
: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

  • [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

Lomeo and Juliet,because it story is so impressing

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media


Showcase

Yes

No

4.1. Does your blog display an archive?

0


4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?

0


4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?

0


4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?

0


4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?

0


5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):

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---

  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)

0


  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")

0


  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)

0


  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)

0


  • "movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)


0

  • "brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")


0

4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?


0

  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?

    • ___ other labels attached to three or more posts

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    • Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.

      • www (n)

      • xxx (m)

      • yyy (o)

      • zzz (p)

      • ...

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4.3. Links & media

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4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?

0


  • Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?


0

  • How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics?

    • ___ posts including photos or other graphics

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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?


0

  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?

    • ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)

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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?


0

  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?

    • ___ posts including other media

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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here:

    1. ...

    2. ...

    3. ...


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  • What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yyyy.mm.dd) for reference.

    1. ... (short link, date)

    2. ... (short link, date)

    3. ... (short link, date)


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4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

  1. ...Q chan's photo about cover

  2. ...

  3. ...



5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it

Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

  • ...renweal this blog is hard to me.

  • ...I enjoyed that looking about my class mates.

  • ...



6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

  • ...next semester I should use more photo and so on.

  • ...

  • ...


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Notes:

  1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).

  2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.

  3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).

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This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog" (without quotation marks).

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Thursday, July 2, 2009

BR-6


Macbeth

This work is also written by Shakespeare and one of tragedy. This is shorter than “hamlet”, “other” and “King Lear”. Story is fighting of Scotland army and Norway army.
Key persons are 3 stitches. Macbeth was trifled with these 3 stitches for a long time.
He was told by her that “ you will not be killed by man that he was born by woman’s the crotch.” But, the person that killed Macbeth was born about Caesar operation. Stitches predict were always truth in this story. I feel so sad. Maybe, I think that Macbeth was very scared about death.

6862+101=6963 wards

BR-5


THE FAERIE QUEENE

This story was written by Edmund Spenser around 1590. this is the largest romance in the Renaissance of England. I will say contents and form, in this story, there were the queen ‘Gloriana’ and 12 knights. These 12 knights fight to many witch. This tell us to truth and so on. The verse is called Spenserian stanza, quote by his mane.
This story has many old English, for example, cheere , brest and so on, in addition, not known thing that, now, if we want to make PP, we should to add ‘ed’ end the word, but that era, we should to add ‘Y’ the first the word.
This story’s verse is so beautiful. It was very difficult for me to read.

6737+125=6862 wards

weekly typing 13

Our department was planning about go to America that we will training about English skills, but new flu cause to stop this plan. We are very disappointed, because we are very looking forward to this plan. Suddenly, I have no plan.
i would like to travel a lot if courtiers, for example, Korea, America and French. if I can go Korea, I would like to shopping. Especially, I want to buy cosmetic. Then, if I can go to America, I do want to go Disney world and leangles. America looks so freedom world. The last, if I can go to French, I want to go many world heritages. For example,


6627+110=6737wards