Tuesday, January 12, 2010

BR2-12 JULIA


Julia Roberts
She is one of my favorite actresses. She appears a lot of major Hollywood movie.

Especially, I like ‘Pretty Woman’. This movie is forerunner of Cinderella story. I think that every women love such like story. This movie contains shopping scene that; if she wear duty clothes, clerk didn’t treat her but, if her wear beautiful clothes, clerk good reception her. Most people judge person at sight, but this movie’s hero did not judge her at sight. He looks an able man. It is wrong that judge of clothes and one’s things.

In addition, last scene is also very impression to me. He is acrophobia but he climbed stare to dearest Viviane, then he gave rose bouquet. I think this it the best happy ending for woman. I love ‘Pretty woman’ and Julia Roberts! Cheers!!!!
10409+98+81+137=10725words

Sunday, January 10, 2010

BR2-11 my faie lady


My fair lady
What do you think about dialect and duty words? Is dialect good thing or bad thing? This story is make a downtown’s girl correct about her phrase by a language researcher. Original name is Pygmalion. This story’s interesting point is this; at first, heroin could speak little fluently English, but at last, she became perfect lady. In addition, this girl and professor’s love also check point. I felt this girl’s admirable love’s emotion is so sweet and sour.
81words

BR2-10 Notthing Hill


Notting Hill
Sometimes, I think that are there fortunately love in the world? If you had not trust about fortunately love, you maybe changed your mind when you see this movie or read this book. This movie’s hero and heroin are common book store’s boy and Holly wood star’s actress. They came across by accident and fell in love casually. Of course, they have a lot of problem, because they our class are so different. But, they excellently get over these problems. This story is very sweet, so maybe very popular in women. I also love this story.
98words

Saturday, January 9, 2010

BR2-09


I read the book that written about Madonna. I think maybe that there are most person who know about her all of the world. Of course I know her, but I did not know tat detail of her. When o finished that I read this book, I was so surprised, because she is very hard worker. It is the most thing that my heart is moved was her life as an under lying, but real her life got over of my image. I think that strongly prey makes dreams come true. In addition, it is the success key that she has a lot of fascinate point, for example, beauty, singing power, dancing and so on. I think that her life as an under lying is also fascinating power, because almost all of the people like success story. I am also one of the fun of her. Especially, I love her songs. ‘Material Girl’ is my recommendation. If you had not chance about listen to her songs, you should listen that’s. I love Madonna!!!
173+10236=10409words

BR2-08



I read a book that was written about Anita. She is the woman who established ‘the Body Shop’. Do you know Body Shop? I use that’s goods everyday. Body Shop sells about shampoo, body soap, body cream, cosmetic, and so on. I use some items without intention, but, this book tells me about a lot of new knowledge for me. First, I was surprised that this shop’s founder was woman. Second, this shop pays a big part in variously activity of society. For example, problem of environment, children who are in disadvantage, human right and so on. Still, this shop makes amount money. I felt happy because some goods were bought by me, then, some percent of sales donation to any disadvantage person. That thins is so wonderful!! I will buy this shop’s goods from now on. Because this shop’s goods has very good smell and cute design, in addition, I can help people who were in disadvantage situation only I buy this shop’s goods.

Especially. I like Moringa and strawberry smell. If you have not use this goods, let’s try them. Cheers!!

183+10053=10236words

Wednesday, January 6, 2010

Student ID: 08122


Portfolio for Writing IV, Section 1A OR 1C

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. OVERVIEW

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)



1.0. ESSAYS

(See: Note 3, below.)


Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).


1.1. Showcase
Short titles with links to blog posts
Dates
yyyy.mm.dd

W
C
L
P
M
2-01a (2009.10.07)

intarlaken




Wednesday, October 7, 2009


24

24









2-01b (2009.10.21)

Beautiful Switzerland



Wednesday, October 21, 2009




4

102








(2-01c)
















2-02a (2009.11.04)

useful internet




Wednesday, November 11, 2009



3

406








2-02b (2009.11.18)

useful internet2



Wednesday, November 11, 2009



5

495








(2-02c)
















2-03a (2009.12.02)

learning English


Monday, November 30, 2009




8

931








2-03b (2009.12.18/22)

learning English2



Wednesday, December 16, 2009




7

1130








(2-03c)
















Totals
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3288










Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post


1.2. Most Improved Essay

(See: Note 4, below.)


Selection and Assessment: Which of the three essays that you've written and revised this semester shows the most improvement? What did you do to improve it? Remember that complete answers are better than short answers, focus on your writing (accuracy, appropriacy, content and organization, rather than graphics or other media), and explain at least two major improvements.
  • [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your most improved essay, and explain ways that you improved it here.]


2.0. COMMENTS

Showcase
Short titles of posts with links
Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*








2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*








2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*

learning English



Monday, November 30, 2009



33


2.4. Most comments on:
Short titles of posts with link
Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd
Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*








2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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2.4.2. Any of your other posts*








2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes comments good.


2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.
  • ...This is first time!!!
    I often visit your blog!!!
    Have a good your holiday !!!

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

  • [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]
  • ....


3.0. BOOK REVIEWS

3.1. Showcase
Short titles with links
Dates: yyyy.mm.dd
Words
Comments
Example:
2007.05.16
39
1
BR 2-01

BR2-01 Aesop's Fables

Wednesday, October 7, 2009

31

BR 2-02

BR2-02

Saturday, November 21, 2009

175

BR 2-03

BR2-03

Wednesday, November 25, 2009

193
1
BR 2-04

BR02-04

Wednesday, November 25, 2009

174

BR 2-05

BR02-05

Monday, November 30, 2009

102

1
BR 2-06

BR2-06

Tuesday, December 29, 2009


184

BR 2-07

BR2-07

Tuesday, December 29, 2009



202

BR 2-08

BR2-08

Saturday, January 9, 2010

183

BR 2-09

BR2-09

Saturday, January 9, 2010

173

BR 2-10

BR2-10 Notthing Hill

Sunday, January 10, 2010

98

BR 2-11

BR2-11 my faie lady

Sunday, January 10, 2010

81

BR 2-12

Tuesday, January 12, 2010

137

BR 2-13




BR 2-14




BR 2-15




BR 2-16




BR 2-17




BR 2-18














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Totals:
1733

Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).


3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
  • [I think that my favorite and best book review is BR2-5(write about Coco Chanel. This book told to me that I didn't know things. I have loved Chanel, then, when I finished read about this book, I love Chanel more. ]


4.0. BLOG LAYOUT, LABELING, LINKING, and MEDIA



Showcase
Yes
No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?

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4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?
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4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?
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4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?
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4.2. Does your blog display a cloud or list of labels in the sidebar?

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4.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):
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  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)

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  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")

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  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)



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  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)



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  • "movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)

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  • "brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")
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4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?



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  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?

    • ___ other labels attached to three or more posts

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    • Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.

      • BR (12)
      • essays (6)
      • yyy (o)
      • zzz (p)
      • ...

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4.3. Links and media
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4.3.1. Do your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics?

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  • Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?



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  • How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics?

    • 18 posts including photos or other graphics

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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?




  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?

    • 1 posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)

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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?



○
  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?

    • 0posts including other media

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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here:

    1. ...
    2. ...
    3. ...



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  • What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yyyy.mm.dd) for reference.

    1. ... (short link, date)
    2. ... (short link, date)
    3. ... (short link, date)



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4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation and readability of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.
1,

I used many photo because when you read my blog, I want you to feel that it blog is very interesting only seeing.

2,

When I wrote free writing, I wrote detail because it things help me if I forget my memory.

5.0. ADDITIONAL REFLECTIONS ON YOUR BLOG AND YOUR WRITING FOR IT

Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, selections, and reflections).
  • ...this blog so hard for me but it is interesting, because this blog has a lot of my precious memories!!
  • ...many homework very heavy,,, but these home works gave me many chances about writing English
  • ...portfolios is very useful to understand own situation every month


6.0. ADVICE AND SUGGESTIONS FOR YOURSELF, YOUR PEERS, AND YOUR SUCCESSORS

  • ...you should write more in summer vacation
  • ...you had better make more phrase
  • ...


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  1. This portfolio template derives from Writing Studio Blog templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc (2007-08), Writing III, §§1a & 1c, Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c (2008-09), and the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III.
  2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
  3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
  4. The essay selection and explanation item (§1.2, above) differs from that in the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III. Please read the new item carefully before making a selection.
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Tuesday, December 29, 2009

my treasure


November, 22,
Today, I went to Fukuoka with my darling, because we planed to buy the pare ring. He picked up me at my house in the morning. I was so exciting in his car so that I have been want to get pare ring. We talked about a lot of things till reach the Fukuoka. We stopped at parking at Fukuoka airport then we got on subway to Tenjin. There were so crowded. I have not been at there so I felt very happy, because I love shopping in Fukuoka. Especially, I like Tenjin Kore. This building has so many kinds of shop store. I love ‘pinky girls’. I do wanted to shopping thoroughly at there, but we had to select the pare ring, so I left there reluctantly. Then we went to Solaria building. There has a lot of kinds pare rings. We were so bother for some minutes, and then we left there for the tine being to go to any shopping building. We went to Iwataya, Daimaru, Mitukoshi, and Ims building, but we could not look for perfect pare ring. So we went to Solaria building again. We were very very very bothered. Maybe we stay there at 1.5 hours. I could not decide what pare ring, so the last my daring decided that. It was so cute design, so I liked it immediately. It has a lot of line stone. Then, we had a little brake, at once, I fitted into ring finger that. I was very happy, so I could not help smiling and fascinating with this ring. We lingered there for a minutes, then we said to good-bye to there. Return road’s in his car, I was always smiling. Pare ring is my dream when I was high school student. My darling gave me ring and dream!!!! I loved him more!! Thank you!! I am intent to treasurer this ring for my life!! Cheers!

9732+321=10053words

Bouquet


December 19, Saturday
Yesterday, I had little dispute with my darling, because we could not verbal communication. He had finished part-time-job then, he came my house in a hurry. We talked about one self’s mind, so we got the restoration of friendship. I was surprised because he apologized that he had a lot of tears. After then, I had to go to part-time-job. He saw me at cram school that my job’s place. After the job, he picked me. Then, he said about he wanted to have little drive, so I answered “yes”. After for a minutes, I became aware of he aimed to the Yathushiro vaguely. This place is so important place for us; because he said about he loves me at this place. Just as my expected, we reached at this memorization place. We got off the car, we had the restoration of friendship again. Then, he said me about “please wait a minutes”. He returned the car, then, he brought the big bouquet!!!! I was so so so so surprised and emotion. He apologizes again. I felt big happy, because I gave so big bouquet for the first time in my life. I love him more. I felt that I want to live with him lifetime. “Thank you for the big bouquet and I love you!!”
219+9513=9732words.

BR2-07

I read the book written about Hanae Mori. She is designer of Japan. You may know about her. Of course I know her, but, I don’t know detailed. I read this book, then I felt that she was women such like had a big power. She lives the time when broke out the Second World War. Until she was a young girl, she was interested in art. But her father wanted her to be a doctor. She abandoned the way of art once, but after the war, she took back her truth dream. In 1946, she had fallen in love with a rich young man called Ken Mori, whose family owned a factory that made clothes. She studied hard on cloth, and then at last, she opened her own brand’s shop. Surprisingly, in 1961, she met to Chanel. Such like many women, longs for Chanel, she also longed for her. Then she said that she said nothing because she was very tensed up. She also got success the way of own as like as Chanel. Now, Hanae’s business makes 5 billion a year. Her clothes collection shoe held Paris, London and so on. Her clothes are famous for all over the world.
202+9513words

BR2-06


I read about Major Speeches of President John F. Kennedy. He is said that he is the most fascinate speaker. His speech are read many people all over the world yet, because his speech so marvelous. This time, I read part the strategy of peace. I felt his speech’s first is fantastic. He wills speech about peace, but this speech’s first is talk about college and innocence. His speech expands into anyway!! This times speech’s the subject is peace, but contain a lot of ream. For example, nature things, family, government, and so on. then, he carry that speech’s content to Cold War gradually. And then, he quotation a lot of things, for example, witty remark, the Bible and so on. I think that this is the one point enchanted by many people. There are few things that I can not understand point, because his living era is difficult now, but it is interesting and teach for me. if I have a time, I would like to read this speech full!! I think that maybe reading speech about variously kinds become food for us.
184+9127=9311words

Fireworks


October 17
This day is my best anniversary.
In the morning, I went to Tokai University to practice cheer leading. We had to play in university’s festival, so this day’s practice was so important for us. But!! Incident was happen. Rina and Eisi didn’t come in gym. So, we could not practice about detail. After the practice, I went to home in a hurry, because I had a plan that do to the fireworks festival with my darling (but then we did not association with him). He picked up me at my house. Then, we aimed to Yathushiro. I had not lunch, so we called at moss Burger’s drive thorough. We had new burger, it was delicious. We talked about a lot of thing in the car. After for a minute, we reached Yathushiro. We walked around; there were a lot of booth. We take the place that for watched fireworks. Then, we waked to buy some food. We bought grilled chicken on a skewer and Taiyaki. They were delicious. After the momentarily, started to display. They were very beautiful!!!! During the fireworks display, he tell me about ・・・・(he said that you should not to tell on blog it contents details). I felt so pleased!!!! Finished fireworks, we returned to Kumamoto city, but we won’t to say good-bye, so we went to baseball grand. We stopped the car, and then talked for about 3 hours. After, he gave me send to my house. The day was the so important anniversary that we started to association. I love my darling!! Cheers!!!
264+8863=9127words.

Kagoshima


October 11, I went to Kagoshima aquarium ‘Io world’ with my boy friend, but then, I did not associate with him. It was the second date with him. I was very looking forward to go to there, because I have never been to Kagoshima. This prefecture is famous of Saigo Takamori, Sathumaage, Xavier, and so on. That day, I got up so early, because I planned to make blanch for him. He picked up me at my house, and then we got off. We imaged that Kagoshima is so far from Kumamoto, so we thought that we had to spend 3 hours at least in the car, but surprisingly we reached soon. Sad to say, we reached there more soon than we planed, so he had no time to eat branch about made by me. We went to the aquarium at once. That aquarium was very small compare with my image, but there were a lot of creature in the sea. There were also a lot of unusual creatures such like that I have never seen. Especially, I was looking forward to see the sea otter. There were few the sea otter, they were so cute. I was exited for them!! Then, we liked the show about dolphin. They were so smart, so we were admired by them. Sometimes, we had some spray. We walked over, so we went to souvenir shop. There were a lot of cute stuffed toy animal. He said that he want to present for me one stuffed toy animals, so I felt very happy!! So, I choose seriously, at last, I decided the sea otter’s stuffed toy animal. He bought 2. it was the first present by him. They are so so so cute!!!! Then we said good-bye to the aquarium. Then, we dangled the Kagoshima, but there are nothing about amused us. We went to shopping mall, product building and so on. at shopping mall, we had lunch. There serviced that the view about the sea. Landscape was so dynamic and romantic. We bought souvenir for own family of Kagoshima’s product. We run for some hour, but there is really nothing, so we decided to turn to Kumamoto. In the car, we laughed from first to last. The time was so interesting for me that with him. We reached to Kumamoto, but I won’t to say good-bye, so I asked to him that I want to go Daikanbo. This place is one of the places that they take us to look very beautiful view. When I was child, I often went to there with my family. This time was the first time that I visit there at night. Night view and star were so beautiful. My heart was moved them. After for a moment, we left there. Returned the road, we called at his part-time job’s skate place. He gave the souvenir. Then, he saw me off at my home. I think that he is very kind and gentle man, add, he has so pure heart. This day was wonderful for me. I do want to go Kagoshima again. Cheers!!
516+8347=8863words

Very Beautiful


September, 18,
the day was perfect for me. This day I was in Interlaken at Switzerland. This town is famous for mountain climbing and sightseeing. Misaki and I did not climb, because climbing was optional tour, so we did not application that. So, we could sightsee and shopping to the full. At the morning, we ate breakfast then preparation slowly. We asked hotel’s women to how to go to the town. It was beautiful whether. I felt very brisk. All of building in this town was so cute. I love London city and French, but this town was lovelier for me. We were so high tension. There are a lot of cute shops. Misaeki wanted to buy the swatch, so we entered a lot of clocks shop. I had an impression shop that shop had a lot of candle. I have never seen about such account of candles. Any of the candles were very cute and beautiful. I felt happy only seen these candles. We entered at any cute shops at random. I hared that Switzerland is famous for chocolate, so we bought a lot of chocolates for souvenirs. Switzerland’s special product is caw, but personally, I do not like caw. I think alpaca is cuter than caw. We bought a lot of cute things. I was not intending to buy the swatch, but I looked at so so so cute swatches. So I asked to clerk that “can I buy this watch in Japan? Only here?” he said “yes, only here” so I decided to buy that watch. Misaki more bought than me. Sad to say, she did not looked at the swatch that to please to her. In behalf of swatch, she bought so cute wall clock for her sister. Then, she bought Switzerland knives for her boy friend, ex-boy friend and herself. To tell the truth, I could not understand about goodness of knife, because it has not chance to use daily life. We finished the shopping for the present, then we got in café. At there, we had lunch. It just hot dogs, but we felt that it was so delicious because we were so tired. The last, but I do ttell you thing is beautiful of river. The river in Interlaken was the most beautiful that I have ever seen the entire river. What’s color was emerald green!!!! My heart wobbled with emotion. If you have a chance that go to the Interlaken, you should see the river!!!! Then we met at climbing member. We gave time that me could shopping for a minutes, but Misaki and my mind already full, so we wait for them in the bus. Then we left, this town. Next, we head to German. On the way, we through at Heidi’s mountain. I heard that there are real about Heidi’s goods. If I have a chance that I will go to the Switzerland, I do want to go there!!!! I slept for some time. The bus stopped at parking area. There was Austria has a lot of famous composer. I have learned about classic music when I was high school student, so I wanted to sightseeing there, but our tour have not that’s likes plan, so I said to good-bye there, then I unwilling got in the bus again. Next day, we had a plan to go the castle of noi-swan, so tour conductor told about this castle’s story. This castle became model of Cinderella’s castle, so I longed this castle. I that this castle maybe is longed by almost girls all over the world. But, in fact, this castle has sad and horrible story. The King at that time longed for Louis 14. he wanted to get superpower, but the people did not follow. So, he suffered from powerless of himself. His life where day and night were reversed. He did not official duty pretty. When I heard this story, my mind felt pain. I could not believe this story because the castle such beautiful as longed by a lot of people all over the world. I was listening that’s story, we reached to the hotel without notice. When I reached the hotel, we had dinner. At the hotel served curry!!! But, it was ……taste was not good for us, and that hotel was shabby. So Misaki and I were felt horrible. We heard about that’s like story, so we uncomfortable. We went to bed in a hurry.
The day’s story is finish. Cheers!!!!

747+7600=8347words