Julia Roberts She is one of my favorite actresses. She appears a lot of major Hollywood movie.
Especially, I like ‘Pretty Woman’. This movie is forerunner of Cinderella story. I think that every women love such like story. This movie contains shopping scene that; if she wear duty clothes, clerk didn’t treat her but, if her wear beautiful clothes, clerk good reception her. Most people judge person at sight, but this movie’s hero did not judge her at sight. He looks an able man. It is wrong that judge of clothes and one’s things.
In addition, last scene is also very impression to me. He is acrophobia but he climbed stare to dearest Viviane, then he gave rose bouquet. I think this it the best happy ending for woman. I love ‘Pretty woman’ and Julia Roberts! Cheers!!!! 10409+98+81+137=10725words
My fair lady What do you think about dialect and duty words? Is dialect good thing or bad thing? This story is make a downtown’s girl correct about her phrase by a language researcher. Original name is Pygmalion. This story’s interesting point is this; at first, heroin could speak little fluently English, but at last, she became perfect lady. In addition, this girl and professor’s love also check point. I felt this girl’s admirable love’s emotion is so sweet and sour. 81words
Notting Hill Sometimes, I think that are there fortunately love in the world? If you had not trust about fortunately love, you maybe changed your mind when you see this movie or read this book. This movie’s hero and heroin are common book store’s boy and Holly wood star’s actress. They came across by accident and fell in love casually. Of course, they have a lot of problem, because they our class are so different. But, they excellently get over these problems. This story is very sweet, so maybe very popular in women. I also love this story. 98words
I read the book that written about Madonna. I think maybe that there are most person who know about her all of the world. Of course I know her, but I did not know tat detail of her. When o finished that I read this book, I was so surprised, because she is very hard worker. It is the most thing that my heart is moved was her life as an under lying, but real her life got over of my image. I think that strongly prey makes dreams come true. In addition, it is the success key that she has a lot of fascinate point, for example, beauty, singing power, dancing and so on. I think that her life as an under lying is also fascinating power, because almost all of the people like success story. I am also one of the fun of her. Especially, I love her songs. ‘Material Girl’ is my recommendation. If you had not chance about listen to her songs, you should listen that’s. I love Madonna!!! 173＋10236＝10409words
I read a book that was written about Anita. She is the woman who established ‘the Body Shop’. Do you know Body Shop? I use that’s goods everyday. Body Shop sells about shampoo, body soap, body cream, cosmetic, and so on. I use some items without intention, but, this book tells me about a lot of new knowledge for me. First, I was surprised that this shop’s founder was woman. Second, this shop pays a big part in variously activity of society. For example, problem of environment, children who are in disadvantage, human right and so on. Still, this shop makes amount money. I felt happy because some goods were bought by me, then, some percent of sales donation to any disadvantage person. That thins is so wonderful!! I will buy this shop’s goods from now on. Because this shop’s goods has very good smell and cute design, in addition, I can help people who were in disadvantage situation only I buy this shop’s goods.
Especially. I like Moringa and strawberry smell. If you have not use this goods, let’s try them. Cheers!!
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Wednesday, January 6, 2010
Student ID: 08122
Portfoliofor Writing IV, Section 1A OR 1C
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. OVERVIEW
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. ESSAYS
(See: Note 3, below.)
Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
1.2. Most Improved Essay
(See: Note 4, below.)
Selection and Assessment: Which of the three essays that you've written and revised this semester shows the most improvement? What did you do to improve it? Remember that complete answers are better than short answers, focus on your writing (accuracy, appropriacy, content and organization, rather than graphics or other media), and explain at least two major improvements.
[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your most improved essay, and explain ways that you improved it here.]
2.0. COMMENTS
Showcase
Short titles of posts with links
Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
---------- * Current semester comments on essays and other posts ** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes comments good.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.
...This is first time!!!
I often visit your blog!!!
Have a good your holiday !!!
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]
Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
[I think that my favorite and best book review is BR2-5(write about Coco Chanel. This book told to me that I didn't know things. I have loved Chanel, then, when I finished read about this book, I love Chanel more. ]
4.0. BLOG LAYOUT, LABELING, LINKING, and MEDIA
Showcase
Yes
No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?
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4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?
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4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?
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4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?
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4.2. Does your blog display a cloud or list of labels in the sidebar?
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4.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):
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"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)
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"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")
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"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)
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"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)
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"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)
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"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")
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4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?
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How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?
___ other labels attached to three or more posts
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Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.
BR (12)
essays (6)
yyy (o)
zzz (p)
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4.3. Links and media
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4.3.1. Do your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics?
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Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?
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How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics?
18 posts including photos or other graphics
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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?
1 posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?
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How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?
0posts including other media
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What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here:
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What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yyyy.mm.dd) for reference.
... (short link, date)
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation and readability of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.
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I used many photo because when you read my blog, I want you to feel that it blog is very interesting only seeing.
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When I wrote free writing, I wrote detail because it things help me if I forget my memory.
5.0. ADDITIONAL REFLECTIONS ON YOUR BLOG AND YOUR WRITING FOR IT
Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, selections, and reflections).
...this blog so hard for me but it is interesting, because this blog has a lot of my precious memories!!
...many homework very heavy,,, but these home works gave me many chances about writing English
...portfolios is very useful to understand own situation every month
6.0. ADVICE AND SUGGESTIONS FOR YOURSELF, YOUR PEERS, AND YOUR SUCCESSORS
Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
The essay selection and explanation item (§1.2, above) differs from that in the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III. Please read the new item carefully before making a selection.
November, 22, Today, I went to Fukuoka with my darling, because we planed to buy the pare ring. He picked up me at my house in the morning. I was so exciting in his car so that I have been want to get pare ring. We talked about a lot of things till reach the Fukuoka. We stopped at parking at Fukuoka airport then we got on subway to Tenjin. There were so crowded. I have not been at there so I felt very happy, because I love shopping in Fukuoka. Especially, I like Tenjin Kore. This building has so many kinds of shop store. I love ‘pinky girls’. I do wanted to shopping thoroughly at there, but we had to select the pare ring, so I left there reluctantly. Then we went to Solaria building. There has a lot of kinds pare rings. We were so bother for some minutes, and then we left there for the tine being to go to any shopping building. We went to Iwataya, Daimaru, Mitukoshi, and Ims building, but we could not look for perfect pare ring. So we went to Solaria building again. We were very very very bothered. Maybe we stay there at 1.5 hours. I could not decide what pare ring, so the last my daring decided that. It was so cute design, so I liked it immediately. It has a lot of line stone. Then, we had a little brake, at once, I fitted into ring finger that. I was very happy, so I could not help smiling and fascinating with this ring. We lingered there for a minutes, then we said to good-bye to there. Return road’s in his car, I was always smiling. Pare ring is my dream when I was high school student. My darling gave me ring and dream!!!! I loved him more!! Thank you!! I am intent to treasurer this ring for my life!! Cheers!
