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BR2－12　JULIA

2010-01-12T00:48:00.002+09:00

Julia Roberts
She is one of my favorite actresses. She appears a lot of major Hollywood movie.

Especially, I like ‘Pretty Woman’. This movie is forerunner of Cinderella story. I think that every women love such like story. This movie contains shopping scene that; if she wear duty clothes, clerk didn’t treat her but, if her wear beautiful clothes, clerk good reception her. Most people judge person at sight, but this movie’s hero did not judge her at sight. He looks an able man. It is wrong that judge of clothes and one’s things.

In addition, last scene is also very impression to me. He is acrophobia but he climbed stare to dearest Viviane, then he gave rose bouquet. I think this it the best happy ending for woman. I love ‘Pretty woman’ and Julia Roberts! Cheers!!!!
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BR2-11 my faie lady

2010-01-10T20:49:00.001+09:00

My fair lady
What do you think about dialect and duty words? Is dialect good thing or bad thing? This story is make a downtown’s girl correct about her phrase by a language researcher. Original name is Pygmalion. This story’s interesting point is this; at first, heroin could speak little fluently English, but at last, she became perfect lady. In addition, this girl and professor’s love also check point. I felt this girl’s admirable love’s emotion is so sweet and sour.
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BR2-10 Notthing Hill

2010-01-10T20:00:00.002+09:00

Notting Hill
Sometimes, I think that are there fortunately love in the world? If you had not trust about fortunately love, you maybe changed your mind when you see this movie or read this book. This movie’s hero and heroin are common book store’s boy and Holly wood star’s actress. They came across by accident and fell in love casually. Of course, they have a lot of problem, because they our class are so different. But, they excellently get over these problems. This story is very sweet, so maybe very popular in women. I also love this story.
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BR2-09

2010-01-09T20:07:00.001+09:00

I read the book that written about Madonna. I think maybe that there are most person who know about her all of the world. Of course I know her, but I did not know tat detail of her. When o finished that I read this book, I was so surprised, because she is very hard worker. It is the most thing that my heart is moved was her life as an under lying, but real her life got over of my image. I think that strongly prey makes dreams come true. In addition, it is the success key that she has a lot of fascinate point, for example, beauty, singing power, dancing and so on. I think that her life as an under lying is also fascinating power, because almost all of the people like success story. I am also one of the fun of her. Especially, I love her songs. ‘Material Girl’ is my recommendation. If you had not chance about listen to her songs, you should listen that’s. I love Madonna!!!
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BR2-08

2010-01-09T20:00:00.002+09:00

I read a book that was written about Anita. She is the woman who established ‘the Body Shop’. Do you know Body Shop? I use that’s goods everyday. Body Shop sells about shampoo, body soap, body cream, cosmetic, and so on. I use some items without intention, but, this book tells me about a lot of new knowledge for me. First, I was surprised that this shop’s founder was woman. Second, this shop pays a big part in variously activity of society. For example, problem of environment, children who are in disadvantage, human right and so on. Still, this shop makes amount money. I felt happy because some goods were bought by me, then, some percent of sales donation to any disadvantage person. That thins is so wonderful!! I will buy this shop’s goods from now on. Because this shop’s goods has very good smell and cute design, in addition, I can help people who were in disadvantage situation only I buy this shop’s goods.

Especially. I like Moringa and strawberry smell. If you have not use this goods, let’s try them. Cheers!!

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2010-01-06T11:31:00.009+09:00

Student ID: 08122

Portfolio for Writing IV, Section 1A OR 1C

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. OVERVIEW

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. ESSAYS

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links to blog posts	Dates yyyy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
2-01a (2009.10.07)	intarlaken	Wednesday, October 7, 2009	２４	２４
2-01b (2009.10.21)	Beautiful Switzerland	Wednesday, October 21, 2009	4	102
(2-01c)
2-02a (2009.11.04)	useful internet	Wednesday, November 11, 2009	3	406
2-02b (2009.11.18)	useful internet2	Wednesday, November 11, 2009	5	495
(2-02c)
2-03a (2009.12.02)	learning English	Monday, November 30, 2009	8	931
2-03b (2009.12.18/22)	learning English2	Wednesday, December 16, 2009	7	1130
(2-03c)
Totals	---	---		3288

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics

M: number of other media included in post

1.2. Most Improved Essay

(See: Note 4, below.)

Selection and Assessment: Which of the three essays that you've written and revised this semester shows the most improvement? What did you do to improve it? Remember that complete answers are better than short answers, focus on your writing (accuracy, appropriacy, content and organization, rather than graphics or other media), and explain at least two major improvements.

[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your most improved essay, and explain ways that you improved it here.]

2.0. COMMENTS

Showcase	Short titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	learning English	Monday, November 30, 2009	33
2.4. Most comments on:	Short titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes comments good.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

...This is first time!!!
I often visit your blog!!!
Have a good your holiday !!!

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]
....

3.0. BOOK REVIEWS

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates: yyyy.mm.dd	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	2007.05.16	39	1
BR 2-01	BR2-01 Aesop's Fables	Wednesday, October 7, 2009	31
BR 2-02	BR2-02	Saturday, November 21, 2009	175
BR 2-03	BR2-03	Wednesday, November 25, 2009	193	1
BR 2-04	BR02-04	Wednesday, November 25, 2009	174
BR 2-05	BR02-05	Monday, November 30, 2009	102	1
BR 2-06	BR2-06	Tuesday, December 29, 2009	184
BR 2-07	BR2-07	Tuesday, December 29, 2009	202
BR 2-08	BR2-08	Saturday, January 9, 2010	183
BR 2-09	BR2-09	Saturday, January 9, 2010	173
BR 2-10	BR2-10 Notthing Hill	Sunday, January 10, 2010	98
BR 2-11	BR2-11 my faie lady	Sunday, January 10, 2010	81
BR 2-12	BR2－12　JULIA	Tuesday, January 12, 2010	137
BR 2-13
BR 2-14
BR 2-15
BR 2-16
BR 2-17
BR 2-18


---	---	Totals:	1733

Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

[I think that my favorite and best book review is BR2-5(write about Coco Chanel. This book told to me that I didn't know things. I have loved Chanel, then, when I finished read about this book, I love Chanel more. ]

4.0. BLOG LAYOUT, LABELING, LINKING, and MEDIA

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?	○
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	○
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	○
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	○
4.2. Does your blog display a cloud or list of labels in the sidebar?	○
4.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	○
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	○
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)		○
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)		○
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)	○
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")	○
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?		○
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ___ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. BR (12) essays (6) yyy (o) zzz (p) ...	---	---
4.3. Links and media	---	---
4.3.1. Do your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics?	○
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?		○
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? 18 posts including photos or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? 1 posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?		○
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? 0posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: ... ... ...	---	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yyyy.mm.dd) for reference. ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date)	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation and readability of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

I used many photo because when you read my blog, I want you to feel that it blog is very interesting only seeing.

When I wrote free writing, I wrote detail because it things help me if I forget my memory.

5.0. ADDITIONAL REFLECTIONS ON YOUR BLOG AND YOUR WRITING FOR IT

Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, selections, and reflections).

...this blog so hard for me but it is interesting, because this blog has a lot of my precious memories!!
...many homework very heavy,,, but these home works gave me many chances about writing English
...portfolios is very useful to understand own situation every month

6.0. ADVICE AND SUGGESTIONS FOR YOURSELF, YOUR PEERS, AND YOUR SUCCESSORS

...you should write more in summer vacation
...you had better make more phrase
...

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Notes:

This portfolio template derives from Writing Studio Blog templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc (2007-08), Writing III, §§1a & 1c, Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c (2008-09), and the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III.
Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
The essay selection and explanation item (§1.2, above) differs from that in the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III. Please read the new item carefully before making a selection.

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my treasure

2009-12-29T23:22:00.002+09:00

November, 22,
Today, I went to Fukuoka with my darling, because we planed to buy the pare ring. He picked up me at my house in the morning. I was so exciting in his car so that I have been want to get pare ring. We talked about a lot of things till reach the Fukuoka. We stopped at parking at Fukuoka airport then we got on subway to Tenjin. There were so crowded. I have not been at there so I felt very happy, because I love shopping in Fukuoka. Especially, I like Tenjin Kore. This building has so many kinds of shop store. I love ‘pinky girls’. I do wanted to shopping thoroughly at there, but we had to select the pare ring, so I left there reluctantly. Then we went to Solaria building. There has a lot of kinds pare rings. We were so bother for some minutes, and then we left there for the tine being to go to any shopping building. We went to Iwataya, Daimaru, Mitukoshi, and Ims building, but we could not look for perfect pare ring. So we went to Solaria building again. We were very very very bothered. Maybe we stay there at 1.5 hours. I could not decide what pare ring, so the last my daring decided that. It was so cute design, so I liked it immediately. It has a lot of line stone. Then, we had a little brake, at once, I fitted into ring finger that. I was very happy, so I could not help smiling and fascinating with this ring. We lingered there for a minutes, then we said to good-bye to there. Return road’s in his car, I was always smiling. Pare ring is my dream when I was high school student. My darling gave me ring and dream!!!! I loved him more!! Thank you!! I am intent to treasurer this ring for my life!! Cheers!

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Bouquet

2009-12-29T13:24:00.002+09:00

December 19, Saturday
Yesterday, I had little dispute with my darling, because we could not verbal communication. He had finished part-time-job then, he came my house in a hurry. We talked about one self’s mind, so we got the restoration of friendship. I was surprised because he apologized that he had a lot of tears. After then, I had to go to part-time-job. He saw me at cram school that my job’s place. After the job, he picked me. Then, he said about he wanted to have little drive, so I answered “yes”. After for a minutes, I became aware of he aimed to the Yathushiro vaguely. This place is so important place for us; because he said about he loves me at this place. Just as my expected, we reached at this memorization place. We got off the car, we had the restoration of friendship again. Then, he said me about “please wait a minutes”. He returned the car, then, he brought the big bouquet!!!! I was so so so so surprised and emotion. He apologizes again. I felt big happy, because I gave so big bouquet for the first time in my life. I love him more. I felt that I want to live with him lifetime. “Thank you for the big bouquet and I love you!!”
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BR2-07

2009-12-29T13:23:00.001+09:00

I read the book written about Hanae Mori. She is designer of Japan. You may know about her. Of course I know her, but, I don’t know detailed. I read this book, then I felt that she was women such like had a big power. She lives the time when broke out the Second World War. Until she was a young girl, she was interested in art. But her father wanted her to be a doctor. She abandoned the way of art once, but after the war, she took back her truth dream. In 1946, she had fallen in love with a rich young man called Ken Mori, whose family owned a factory that made clothes. She studied hard on cloth, and then at last, she opened her own brand’s shop. Surprisingly, in 1961, she met to Chanel. Such like many women, longs for Chanel, she also longed for her. Then she said that she said nothing because she was very tensed up. She also got success the way of own as like as Chanel. Now, Hanae’s business makes 5 billion a year. Her clothes collection shoe held Paris, London and so on. Her clothes are famous for all over the world.
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BR2-06

2009-12-29T13:21:00.002+09:00

I read about Major Speeches of President John F. Kennedy. He is said that he is the most fascinate speaker. His speech are read many people all over the world yet, because his speech so marvelous. This time, I read part the strategy of peace. I felt his speech’s first is fantastic. He wills speech about peace, but this speech’s first is talk about college and innocence. His speech expands into anyway!! This times speech’s the subject is peace, but contain a lot of ream. For example, nature things, family, government, and so on. then, he carry that speech’s content to Cold War gradually. And then, he quotation a lot of things, for example, witty remark, the Bible and so on. I think that this is the one point enchanted by many people. There are few things that I can not understand point, because his living era is difficult now, but it is interesting and teach for me. if I have a time, I would like to read this speech full!! I think that maybe reading speech about variously kinds become food for us.
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Fireworks

2009-12-29T13:18:00.002+09:00

October 17
This day is my best anniversary.
In the morning, I went to Tokai University to practice cheer leading. We had to play in university’s festival, so this day’s practice was so important for us. But!! Incident was happen. Rina and Eisi didn’t come in gym. So, we could not practice about detail. After the practice, I went to home in a hurry, because I had a plan that do to the fireworks festival with my darling (but then we did not association with him). He picked up me at my house. Then, we aimed to Yathushiro. I had not lunch, so we called at moss Burger’s drive thorough. We had new burger, it was delicious. We talked about a lot of thing in the car. After for a minute, we reached Yathushiro. We walked around; there were a lot of booth. We take the place that for watched fireworks. Then, we waked to buy some food. We bought grilled chicken on a skewer and Taiyaki. They were delicious. After the momentarily, started to display. They were very beautiful!!!! During the fireworks display, he tell me about ・・・・(he said that you should not to tell on blog it contents details). I felt so pleased!!!! Finished fireworks, we returned to Kumamoto city, but we won’t to say good-bye, so we went to baseball grand. We stopped the car, and then talked for about 3 hours. After, he gave me send to my house. The day was the so important anniversary that we started to association. I love my darling!! Cheers!!!
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Kagoshima

2009-12-29T13:14:00.002+09:00

October 11, I went to Kagoshima aquarium ‘Io world’ with my boy friend, but then, I did not associate with him. It was the second date with him. I was very looking forward to go to there, because I have never been to Kagoshima. This prefecture is famous of Saigo Takamori, Sathumaage, Xavier, and so on. That day, I got up so early, because I planned to make blanch for him. He picked up me at my house, and then we got off. We imaged that Kagoshima is so far from Kumamoto, so we thought that we had to spend 3 hours at least in the car, but surprisingly we reached soon. Sad to say, we reached there more soon than we planed, so he had no time to eat branch about made by me. We went to the aquarium at once. That aquarium was very small compare with my image, but there were a lot of creature in the sea. There were also a lot of unusual creatures such like that I have never seen. Especially, I was looking forward to see the sea otter. There were few the sea otter, they were so cute. I was exited for them!! Then, we liked the show about dolphin. They were so smart, so we were admired by them. Sometimes, we had some spray. We walked over, so we went to souvenir shop. There were a lot of cute stuffed toy animal. He said that he want to present for me one stuffed toy animals, so I felt very happy!! So, I choose seriously, at last, I decided the sea otter’s stuffed toy animal. He bought 2. it was the first present by him. They are so so so cute!!!! Then we said good-bye to the aquarium. Then, we dangled the Kagoshima, but there are nothing about amused us. We went to shopping mall, product building and so on. at shopping mall, we had lunch. There serviced that the view about the sea. Landscape was so dynamic and romantic. We bought souvenir for own family of Kagoshima’s product. We run for some hour, but there is really nothing, so we decided to turn to Kumamoto. In the car, we laughed from first to last. The time was so interesting for me that with him. We reached to Kumamoto, but I won’t to say good-bye, so I asked to him that I want to go Daikanbo. This place is one of the places that they take us to look very beautiful view. When I was child, I often went to there with my family. This time was the first time that I visit there at night. Night view and star were so beautiful. My heart was moved them. After for a moment, we left there. Returned the road, we called at his part-time job’s skate place. He gave the souvenir. Then, he saw me off at my home. I think that he is very kind and gentle man, add, he has so pure heart. This day was wonderful for me. I do want to go Kagoshima again. Cheers!!
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Very Beautiful

2009-12-29T13:11:00.002+09:00

September, 18,
the day was perfect for me. This day I was in Interlaken at Switzerland. This town is famous for mountain climbing and sightseeing. Misaki and I did not climb, because climbing was optional tour, so we did not application that. So, we could sightsee and shopping to the full. At the morning, we ate breakfast then preparation slowly. We asked hotel’s women to how to go to the town. It was beautiful whether. I felt very brisk. All of building in this town was so cute. I love London city and French, but this town was lovelier for me. We were so high tension. There are a lot of cute shops. Misaeki wanted to buy the swatch, so we entered a lot of clocks shop. I had an impression shop that shop had a lot of candle. I have never seen about such account of candles. Any of the candles were very cute and beautiful. I felt happy only seen these candles. We entered at any cute shops at random. I hared that Switzerland is famous for chocolate, so we bought a lot of chocolates for souvenirs. Switzerland’s special product is caw, but personally, I do not like caw. I think alpaca is cuter than caw. We bought a lot of cute things. I was not intending to buy the swatch, but I looked at so so so cute swatches. So I asked to clerk that “can I buy this watch in Japan? Only here?” he said “yes, only here” so I decided to buy that watch. Misaki more bought than me. Sad to say, she did not looked at the swatch that to please to her. In behalf of swatch, she bought so cute wall clock for her sister. Then, she bought Switzerland knives for her boy friend, ex-boy friend and herself. To tell the truth, I could not understand about goodness of knife, because it has not chance to use daily life. We finished the shopping for the present, then we got in café. At there, we had lunch. It just hot dogs, but we felt that it was so delicious because we were so tired. The last, but I do tｔell you thing is beautiful of river. The river in Interlaken was the most beautiful that I have ever seen the entire river. What’s color was emerald green!!!! My heart wobbled with emotion. If you have a chance that go to the Interlaken, you should see the river!!!! Then we met at climbing member. We gave time that me could shopping for a minutes, but Misaki and my mind already full, so we wait for them in the bus. Then we left, this town. Next, we head to German. On the way, we through at Heidi’s mountain. I heard that there are real about Heidi’s goods. If I have a chance that I will go to the Switzerland, I do want to go there!!!! I slept for some time. The bus stopped at parking area. There was Austria has a lot of famous composer. I have learned about classic music when I was high school student, so I wanted to sightseeing there, but our tour have not that’s likes plan, so I said to good-bye there, then I unwilling got in the bus again. Next day, we had a plan to go the castle of noi-swan, so tour conductor told about this castle’s story. This castle became model of Cinderella’s castle, so I longed this castle. I that this castle maybe is longed by almost girls all over the world. But, in fact, this castle has sad and horrible story. The King at that time longed for Louis 14. he wanted to get superpower, but the people did not follow. So, he suffered from powerless of himself. His life where day and night were reversed. He did not official duty pretty. When I heard this story, my mind felt pain. I could not believe this story because the castle such beautiful as longed by a lot of people all over the world. I was listening that’s story, we reached to the hotel without notice. When I reached the hotel, we had dinner. At the hotel served curry!!! But, it was ……taste was not good for us, and that hotel was shabby. So Misaki and I were felt horrible. We heard about that’s like story, so we uncomfortable. We went to bed in a hurry.
The day’s story is finish. Cheers!!!!

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I love French!!!!

2009-12-29T13:09:00.001+09:00

September, 17
This day also we woke up early. We finished eating breakfast, then we left the hotel at 8 o’clock first, we went to the Versailles Palace. When I reached there, I was overpowered with the too splendid screen. I felt that super power of Louis 14. This Palace’s out side was bright at gold, add, site was so vast. That’s thing are absolutely nothing in Japan. I thought that he was just like the sun’s king. When I entered this Palace, I was more surprised. Inside was so beautiful pictures covered every where. I thought that some how artists draw the pictures such places. We walked around some room, especially; Marie-Antoinette’s room was so cute!! Her room covered with flower embroidery all over the wall. Surprisingly, in those days, deliver released at common man. I could not believe that thing. After for a minute, at last, we entered the mirror’s room!! I had seen this room on source book about world history, so I was so exited. Covering with mirror all over the wall, that makes us feel illusion about this room is so large. In addition, this room’s chandeliers were so beautiful. I heard that chandeliers made with amethyst. It looks light purple. I felt happy because my birthstone is also that stone. Then we went to garden. Garden’s landscape was perfect. These gardens were repaired carefully. Constitution is correct symmetry. I heard Marie liked this garden, and her most fright thing was boring. Maybe, I can not understand her really mind. We descent from this Palace to street by walking. Then, shopping time at long awaited started!!!! But shop that we entered was brand shop, so all article were very expensive for me. I found very cute strap of cell phone, so I bought that two for my friends and me. Then we had lunch. Sad to say, I can not remember of this time for some reason. After we went to the station for go to Switzerland. We ride TGV, and I was snug in seat during the way. Our train stopped at the station on the way, I seen a couple kissed very passionate at the time, I thought that it is different from Japan!! After, we reached to Switzerland incident. Then we had dinner. That restaurant served very delicious dessert. After the dinner, we ride the bus again, so aimed to Interlaken. In the bus, I slept almost all the time. When we reached there, it was about at 11 p.m. it was so cold! We entered the room, and then got into bed on time. This day does explain is that all!! Cheers!!!!
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England&French

2009-12-29T13:03:00.001+09:00

Next day, we had to get up so early because we had a lot of plan about visit to sightseeing places. Breakfast in NOVOTEL LONDON WEST (that is our stayed hotel) was the best breakfast for me in this travel. They had a lot of menu, foe example, variously bread, many ham, egg, salads, flake, yoghurt, add, the most fascinate things were waffle and a lot of fruits! All were very delicious for me. After the breakfast, Misaki and I finished up about preparation too fast, and then rambled about city of London. Everything about came in view were so cute and beautiful even normal house’s door for me. After for a minute, we return the hotel and then we said good- bye that one. We started sightseeing city of London. First, we went to Big Ben. There is clock tower, this clock is said that the most exact for all over the world. I took some picture, then we got into the bus again. Then we aimed to Buckingham Palace. When the bus leached there, I was so surprised and exiting because this Palace was very very gosiaus, elegant and beautiful. I have never seen that such a beautiful building. We took off the bus, and then walked around the Palace. My heart was moved that I saw just in sight. I wanted to more stay here but we had no time so we got in the bus again in hurry. Then we went to Tower Bridge. In the bus, we listened to talk by guide about Tower Bridge, then, for some reason I felt sad, but reached there, I was so exiting. Misaki and I walked around for a minutes, then we dashed to souvenir shop. This time, we showed our self at one’s best. We love shopping. We looked for a lot of cute goods. Our tension was so high, so we bought a variously goods for family, friends and absolutely me!! We returned the bus in a hurry, we aimed to the station to ride EURO star. Our bus pass the city of London, we could look beautiful view by bus window. Saint Paul’s in the one of the thing that it left of my heart. On the way, we got the lunch. Menu was sandwich chocolate, yoghurt, cake and apple. Personally, I liked this lunch. On the way to the station, we could see the Kings Cross station. This station comes on the Harry Potter. So I was much exited. But our station was not Kings Cross station. I want to see directly about 9 and third fourth line. We passed the custom, and then we unwillingly said good-bye to London. At the station, Misaki and I found do cute boy. Then we ride Euro Star. In the train, we ate Lunch. All of the menus were so delicious. We were so tired, so we immediately slept in the train. When I woke up, landscape of outside was so country and some houses were very cute!! French was the longest country for me. We got off the Euro Star, then we ride the bus. My French’s image was so beautiful and cute, but actually, this country’s my first impression was to tell the truth, so duty. Because, a lot of dust in the street. When reached French, I was so tired unheard-of. But, our plan has to sightseeing about French and goes the Louvre. First, we came around a lot of famous place of French. Looked at Eiffel Tower, I felt that now, I am in French really!! In that place, Misaki and I found at so cool boy!! So we ask to him that took a picture with us. He agreeably said “yes”. Then we went to stand. There had a lot of very cute item!! We were absolutely exiting. Then, we bought so cute T-suit. Gentle clerk were price down for us!! We said to him about thank, headed for the bus. We also see the arch f triumph. It is so big, my heart was moved. Then, we steer to the Louvre. This place was one of the longest places when I was high school student. Enter the Louvre, my tension was sooooo high, because there are so many famous works like appear the source book about world history. A lot of works hit my heart. When I watched the Mona Lisa, I was so exiting. Guide talked about works detail, I felt that I become knowledgeable person. Napoleon Bonaparte’s coronation ceremony was maybe the best works for me. I felt that I stand top of the world because I could see directly a lot of famous works but!!!! I felt so sick. Dizzy and tire attacked me!! I wanted to more romp but there was no energy for me. This thing is the most regrettable thing. We got on the bus again, we aimed to the restaurant. Misaki and I slept for this time. Reached the restaurant, our meet started. Dinner’s menu was absolutely French. This restaurant had the surprised menu for us. This was escargot!!!! When I see this plate, I was so amazed because this thing looks just snail for me!!! I faced escargot with firm resolution!! Taste was,,,,,,,,, I felt like ,,,, shell!! Surprisingly I could eat escargot. Fun time was gone, we aimed to today’s hotel. We reached the hotel, went to each room. Misaki and I talked a lot of things about this travel, but next day we had to wake up so early and we were so tired, so we slept at early night. The second day’s rough memorize was end!! I love London and French!! This day also the most important day in my life!! Cheers!!

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Mini presentation

2009-12-22T02:13:00.002+09:00

Today, I did speech to my class mates in speaking class. This called mini presentation.
Then, I will tell about my presentation’s details. My presentation’s theme is my hobbies. Please listen!!

Hello!! I am Maki!! This time, I will talk about my 3 hobbies. First hobby is trip. I am interested in a lot of country. In this summer vacation, I went to Europe with Misaki. We went to Korea, England, French, Switzerland and German. Every country were so wonderful. Especially, Louvure, Versailles Palace and Routenbulk impressed for me. Louvure has a lot of the most famous works, for example this, but, sad to say I was very tired and felt sick so I did not enjoy my ability. Versailles Palace was so magnificent. I felt big force about Ruiz 14. Switzerland was also wonderful place for me. We went to the town that called Interlaken. This town is famous about climbing. But Misaki and I did not join to climbing tour. It was clear, so we shopping all we want. This watch bought in this town. The last, I will tell about routenbulk in German. This town’s all building was so so so so cute. So I felt that I want to live there.
Second hobby is nail art. I like nail art by my self. When I have some time, I paint my finger nails. The other day, I made nail chip for Hanako, because she will receive adult ceremony in January next year. I felt happy if she likes that. Please look today’s my nail. When I painted this nail, I imaged about Christmas and Santa close. We wish a merry Christmas!!
The last hobby is watching movie. Especially I like love comedy. My favorite movie is Legally Blond. Do you know this? This movie’s heroin is Elle Woods. She is so positive and charming girl. She has not only beautiful, but also bug effort. The last in this movie, she gets her dream admirably. I longing for her. When I sink, I always see this movie. This movie gives me very big power. If you have not seen this movie, you should see this!!
I want to talk more my hobbies, but I have not so long time. Thanks to listening my presentation.

I could not talk smooth because I felt so nerves. I think that I should do more practice for presentation. But I experienced precious time for me!! Cheers!!!!
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Speaking

2009-12-21T23:46:00.000+09:00

Speaking class’s discussion!!
My group thinking about the park that if we had that in the university. Group member is Misaki, Chikako, Rica and I. we discussed to Yoko’s group. Her group’s theme is locker. First, her group remarked many ideas. They said that if our university has a lot of locker, we can leave many things, for example, so heavy text book, jersey for PE and so on. Add, they if we can use free umbrella, we have not in trouble if suddenly rain. In reverse, our group asked many question fort them, for example,
Where you will set up the locker?
If the locker has things for long time, so you can not find the owner, when will you intend to throw away?
If I want to use this locker, I have to pay the fee?
And so on. They answered so polite. They plan to set up near Gakusei Kaikan, and we decided to term about keep the things. In addition, they said that when we use this locker and umbrella, we have to pay but this money will return final.
Then, my group tells about our ideas. We think that if our university has a big garden, we can more enjoy activities. For example, we can play many sports, we feel refresh, you have not to go to training room (because there often have so many people, so we can not use any machine), and kindergartner with our university can use this garden.
Then Yoko’s group member asked us. For example,
Your idea is very good, but where you intend to make that grand?
You said that in the grand serve much kind of sports, for example what?
And so on. Then we answered that’s question.
We plan to make this grand near to university. Our university maybe has amount of money, so we had better buy the state.
We plan to open a lot of sports class for everyone. At there, you can take part in all classes.
We exchanged more a lot of one self’s opinions. Our discussion’s time went in a flash. It was regret for me that I did not say my opinion to the full. But I spent enjoy time!! Cheers!!!!
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learning English2

2009-12-16T12:34:00.002+09:00

I have been learning English for a long time, more than 10 years. I think that English is located on-a-days language for almost of Japanese. Now, a lot of young children learn about English. For example, having an English lesson, listening about spoken English, leading about English books, singing English songs, writing blogs in English and watching English movies. I think that English is becoming necessary things, because there are a lot of American and English movies showing and so many Western music running in Japan. So I feel that English is more and more close our life. It is no exaggeration to say that English becoming common language in the world. Where position at English for your life? Necessary thin? Don’t you have a trouble if there is no English for your life? Then, I will talk about my learning English of past, present and my future.

First, I will talk about learning English of my past. I think that first learning English of my life, maybe when I was second class at elementary school. That was my brother’s English class in YAMAHA English School. I did not enter this school directly, but I remember that the class was so fantastic. I loved that this class’s teacher. After, sad to say my brother quiet the class because this teacher had to went to abroad, so we lost about learning English chance. Few years later, I got a chance about learning English again. It was that when I was fifth or the last grade in elementary school. On this class, I memorized foundation about English, for example, what say about week in English; pronounce about alphabet, the most important words in English and so on. In my memories, this class was very interesting for me.

When I was entered at junior high school, English class started in earnest. In junior high school’s English were so interesting for me. In English class, we sang a lot of very famous English songs, for example, stand by me, Beatles, and so on. Add, I liked all English teachers and ALT. In those days, I felt that so serve for us, but now, I appreciate for them.
Then, I was entry into high school. Learning English in high school, main study English was thing that to enter university. So I felt now, in high school, I was not fun about study English. But, I think that when I was high school student, I studied English hard. I did not especially liked English, but I do want to enter the famous university, so I studied hard. The way to study English were memorized a lot of words, reading long sentence so many the past exam test about a lot of university, worked out the past about center test, memorized many idiom and so on. But I could not quite level up at English grade in high school times. The other, I was so friendly with our high school’s ALT. his name is Austin. He often invited dinner to some friendly student at Joy Full after school. At the time, we had to speak English only. We always had wonderful time. I think now, he was so kind and gave us to very precious times. I appreciated for him!!

After graduation the high school, I do wanted to some university, so I decided to spend one year preparing for the entrance examinations after I left high school. I commuted at KOKEI JUKU. In this place, I carried out about meeting with English teacher in my destiny. Her name is Miss. Chida. She is famous in examinee of university because, her lesson is so excellent!! Of course, I picked up her class. In her class that was necessary about prep. If you did not pre, you will feel like death penalty. She teaches not only English but also a lot of important things on life. I felt like to cry over and over again when I heard her talk. Thanks to her talk, my sight expended, add I study so heard about English. I came around that I like English. Sad to say, I did not enter the my wanted university, but I decided go to KGU because where give chance to student to learn English.

Next, I will talk about my present learning about English. To tell the truth, I feel that my English level is down since I entered the university, because now, I don’t study hard as when I was an examinee. This summer, I went to Europe with Misaki. Frankly speaking, I was so sad because I had little English skill. My English pronounces were little got through. Add, I felt impatient because I went out the words quiet. Compare with me, all of the people in Europe spoken English. They speak mother tongue and English naturally. This fact was so shocking to me. I felt that I have to more study about grammar, listening skills, looking wordbook and practice pronounced about English.

The last, I will talk about learning English in my future. I observed on like before sentences, I have scarcely skill about speak English, so I think that I have to practice speak English. I entered the English subject, so I want to catch the learning chance. In my collage, there is English Lounge. This place gives for all of the my college student to speak overseas students. I should more exploit this Lounge. I think that the best way to success that I can speak English fluently is the thing that I have a lot of the chance speaks English to native. Also, I do want to get good score on the TOIEC and TOEFL, because if I have good score about the TOEIC or TOEFL, maybe effectual about job interview and study abroad. So I have to study hard. If I go to abroad again, I want to speak English naturally.

I have been studying English for a so long time, but I have hardly English ability. I can not speak English like European. I think that Japan is developed country and must be in good education, though how many Japanese speak English fluently by training school educate? I think that Japanese boards of education has to do about student more study English them is little boys and girls. Especially, I think that they should give for children to the chance to speak native. I think that speaking English fluently so important for my future, because, now English is established on a common language. Also, be able to communication to all over the world is wonderful thing!! From on now, if you can not speak English, you often encounter the time about your feel disadvantage. For the sake of nothing bother, I would like to last studying English.

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BR02-05

2009-11-30T21:44:00.005+09:00

I read book written about Coco Chanel. CHANEL is my favorite brand. But I did not know about her story, so when I read this book, I was so surprised. First, my surprise point is she is so longer about rich, so she lent amount of money by rich man for herself, and then she began to shop. In the early 20 century, there were describing at women. At that time, took in that thinking that women should be in their house. But, Chanel daringly challenged to various things. Her talent was so wonderful. It is no exaggeration to say that she is forerunner of feminism. I think that she had strong will, so she got success. Now, her brand are loved a lot of people all over the world.

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learning English

2009-11-30T21:17:00.004+09:00

I have learning English for a long time. Maybe more than 10 years. I think that English is located on second language for almost of Japanese. Now, a lot of young children learn about English. For example, having a English lesson, listening about English, leading about English books, singing English songs and so on. I think that English is becoming necessary things, because there are a lot of American and English movies showing and so many Western music running in Japan. So we feel that English is more and more close our life. It is no exaggeration to say that English becoming common language in the world. Where position at English for your life? Necessary thin? Don’t you have a trouble if there is no English for your life? Then, I will talk about my learning English of past, present and my future.

First, I will talk about learning English of my past. I think that first learning English of my life, maybe when I was second class at elementary school. That was my brother’s English class in YAMAHA English School. I did not enter this school directly, but I remember that the class was so fantastic. I loved that this class’s teacher. After, sad to say my brother quiet the class because this teacher had to went to abroad, so we lost about learning English chance. Few years later, I got a chance about learning English again. It was that when I was fifth or the last grade in elementary school. On this class, I memorized foundation about English, for example, what say about week in English; pronounce about alphabet, the most important words in English and so on. In my memories, this class was very interesting for me.

When I was entered at junior high school, English class started in earnest. In junior high school’s English were so interesting for me. In English class, we sang a lot of very famous English songs, for example, stand by me, Beatles, and so on. Add, I liked all English teachers and ALT. In those days, I felt that so serve for us, but now, I appreciate for them.

Then, I was entry into high school. Learning English in high school, main study English was thing that to enter university. So I felt now, in high school, I was not fun about study English. But, I think that when I was high school student, I studied English hard. I did not especially liked English, but I do want to enter the famous university, so I studied hard. The way to study English were memorized a lot of words, reading long sentence so many the past exam test about a lot of university, worked out the past about center test, memorized many idiom and so on. But I could not quite level up at English grade in high school times. The other, I was so friendly with our high school’s ALT. his name is Austin. He often invited dinner to some friendly student at Joy Full after school. At the time, we had to speak English only. We always had wonderful time. I think now, he was so kind and gave us to very precious times. I appreciated for him!!

After graduation the high school, I do wanted to some university, so I decided to spend one year preparing for the entrance examinations after I left high school. I commuted at KOKEI JUKU. In this place, I carried out about meeting with English teacher in my destiny. Her name is Miss. Chida. She is famous in examinee of university because, her lesson is so excellent!! Of course, I picked up her class. In her class that was necessary about prep. If you did not pre, you will feel like death penalty. She teaches not only English but also a lot of important things on life. I felt like to cry over and over again when I heard her talk. Thanks to her talk, my sight expended, add I study so heard about English. I came around that I like English. Sad to say, I did not enter the my wanted university, but I decided go to KGU because where give chance to student to learn English.

Next, I will talk about my present learning about English. To tell the truth, I feel that my English level is down since I enter the university. Because, now, I don’t study hard as when I was examinee. This summer, I went to Europe with Misaki on trip. Frankly speaking, I was so sad because I had little English skill. My English pronounce were little got through. Add, I felt impatient because I went out the words quiet. But, all of the people in Europe were spoken English naturally. So they speak mother tongue and English. This fact was so shocking to me. I felt that I have to more study and practice pronounced about English.

The last, I will talk about learning English in my future. I entered the English subject, so I want to catch the learning chance. I want to be speaking English friendly. And, I do want to get good score on TOIEC and TOEFL. If I go to abroad, I want to speak English naturally.

I think that Japan board of education has to do about student more study English they are little boys and girls. I think that speaking English frumenty so important for future. Because, now English is establishing on common language. From on now, if you can not speak English, you often encounter the time about your feel disadvantage.

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BR02-04

2009-11-25T00:35:00.002+09:00

GUCCI
I think that almost all of the young boys and girls maybe know about GUCCI, but just as one though, how many people know about detail of GUCCI? I also have not known until read this book. First, I was surprised about that gutti’s looks is usual mister. Add, he had 6 children was also surprised me. Because having 6 children are too many for me. He wanted all of his sons to work his company. But it was a dream. He had a lot of wonderful idea so his company became bigger and bigger, then GUTTI became more and more famous. Now, GUTTI’s shops are the entire world. A lot of person of great renown are notice with GUTTI’s goods. There is no end the bag, so many goods are very popular. For example, tie, wallet, jewelry, scarf, perfume, belt, party dress, shoes and so on. Especially, I like perfume. I am one of the GUTTI’s funs!! I think bottom oh my heart that his talent is so special! I love GUTTI!

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BR2-03

2009-11-25T00:33:00.002+09:00

Audrey Hepburn
Do you know Audrey Hepburn? I think that she is the one of the most famous actress in the world. She has a lot of movie’s leading actress. For example, Roman Holiday, Breakfast at Tiffany’s, Sad times, My Fare Leady, and so on. Especially, I like Roman Holiday. I think that maybe this story is so imaginary story, but there are a lot of romantic factor. Add, Audrey in this movie is so so beautiful. When I watched this movie, I longed for her. Maybe if watch her movie, all of people will fall in love with her. Her actress time is also very nice, but I think that her aged time also or more than nice. She was interested in help poor people because she remembered her early years, at the end of the war. So she started work for the United Nations. She visited the poorest and the most dangerous countries in the world. I respect her because her visited place was no water. I can not image that the life at such place. Her beauty is not only looks but her heart. I want to be like her!!

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BR2-02

2009-11-21T22:29:00.003+09:00

Love actually
This story’s stage is London in Christmas. Main cast are 19 men and women. There are 9 love stories and moving at one time in this movie. Davit is prime minister. He fallen love with his secretary secretly. Daniel’s son-in-low can not speak in no way, because he fallen love with his class mate that she is the sweetest girl in his school. Jamey goes to cottage in south of French then he meet maid who speaks only Portuguese. Harry has a wife and 3 cute children, but he is approached by his man’s Mia. Birr is a lock singer, but he can not debut because he always speaks railings. Mark say about congratulation to his best’s wedding, but he has secret. Koran leaves to America because he wants to get a girl friends. John and Judy are making friends gradually. What do you think about this story’s last?
I felt happy when I finished this book read. This Christmas is coming soon. Do you have a bright plan? I love Christmas!!

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useful internet2

2009-11-11T14:01:00.002+09:00

I think internet is so useful for us all over the world. Thanks to about this we get to things all along the line. For example, business, offer to a lot of news at we can not get if we leave daily life, you can talk with who you have never met on web site, you can shopping in your room about variously goods that made in all over the world and so on. This time, I paid attention about 3 sites. These are Barbie, H&M and the New York times news about Iraq.

First, I will talk about Barbie’s site. This site’s good point are very cute so it makes us fun, add, this site has a lot of goods that we can not get goods in Japan, then, this site let me see that not only Barbie’s goods for example, many kinds of toy for boys so both boys and girls maybe feel fantastic. Then, this site connects about Disney’s site, so if you are also Disney’s fun, you will feel more interesting

Next, I will talk about H&M’s site. It is advantage that you can shopping about a lot of goods not only sale in Japan but also America, England, Korea and so on. You can get original goods each country moreover you are in your room. Through internet shopping, it is no exaggeration to say that world economy is too changes. Maybe, everyday run about that we can not see immediately amount money.

The last, I will talk about the New York times news about Iraq’s site. These site publications about Iraq. These area violent fights happens everyday. I have never been to Iraq, I have never seen gun, I have never experienced a war, but sites like this that tell us a lot of fact. If there are not the internet, we could not know about affaire happens all over the world. I think that you get good news is fun things, but if it is truth, you get but news is also important thing. You must know that now what happen in the world just at the back

Internet contains a lot of element. We live in developed country, so we can see the internet any time, but we must be comprehended that this things is special things. Shopping by using internet, looking for amused information, talked with many friends in web site are also interesting and important things, but you should not use the last. You more keep a watchful eye on affair about truth but and sad news, so only knowing may connect something.
In Barbie’s site will give you amusing time, because this site is so cute and has a lot of toy goods. In H&M’s site will give you information about there are not in Japan. The New York times news about Iraq’s site will tell us truth affair. Looking this site, you may be reflected a lot of things. Internet surely spread our view.
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useful internet

2009-11-11T08:42:00.004+09:00

I think internet is so useful for us all over the world. Thanks to about this we get to things all along the line. For example, business, offer to a lot of news at we can not get if we leave daily life, you can talk with who you have never met on web site, you can shopping in your room about variously goods that made in all over the world and so on.

First, I talk about Barbie’s site. This site’s good point are very cute so it makes us fun, add, this site has a lot of goods that we can not get goods in Japan, then, this site let me see that not only Barbie’s goods for example, many kinds of toy for boys so both boys and girls maybe feel fantastic. Then, this site connects about Disney’s site, so if you are also Disney’s fun, you will feel more interesting.
Next, I talk about H&M’s site. It is advantage that you can shopping about a lot of goods not only sale in Japan but also America, England, Korea and so on. You can get original goods each country moreover you are in your room. Through internet shopping, it is no exaggeration to say that world economy is too changes. Maybe, everyday run about that we can not see immediately amount money.
The last, I talk about news’s site. These site publications about Iraq. These area violent fights happens everyday. I have never been to Iraq, I have never seen gun, I have never experienced a war, but sites like this that tell us a lot of fact. If there are not the internet, we could not know about affaire happens all over the world. I think that you get good news is fun things, but if it is truth, you get but news is also important thing. You must know that now what happen in the world just at the back.

Internet contains a lot of element. We live in developed country, so we can see the internet any time, but we must be comprehended that this things is special things. Shopping by using internet, looking for amused information, talked with many friends in web site are also interesting and important things, but you should not use the last. You more keep a watchful eye on affair about truth but and sad news, so only knowing may connect something.
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http://barbie.everythinggirl.com/
http://www.hm.com/us/#/startns/
http://topics.nytimes.com/top/news/international/countriesandterritories/iraq/index.htm

2009-11-04T10:21:00.003+09:00

First, I talk about Barbie’s site. This site’s good point are very cute so it makes us fun, add, this site has a lot of goods that we can not get goods in Japan, then, this site let me see that not only Barbie’s goods for example, many kinds of toy for boys so both boys and girls maybe feel fantastic. Then, this site connect about Disney’s site, so if you are also Disney’s fun, you will feel more interesting.
Next, I talk

Beautiful Switzerland

2009-10-21T10:23:00.003+09:00

My favorite place is Switzerland. This place has a lot of special things. I really recommend this place.

At first, there are so so so so beautiful water. The river color is emerald green. I saw the river for the first time; I was very surprised about that. I think that this color is nothing in Japan.

Then, this place has beautiful landscape of mountain. I fascinated unconsciously. I always look at Mt. Aso, but Switzerland’s mountain were different of a tasteful remark.

Then, there are famous for watches. If you go there, you will look a lot of swatches all over.
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THE SEA!!

2009-10-12T21:55:00.001+09:00

August 2, I went to the sea about Shirathurugahama with Asami, Hanako and Rica. We are best friends about college. Asami, Hanako and I were rendezvous at convenience store near to our college; Rica was picked at on the way. We bought a lot of sweets, Onigiri and drinks at convenience store. In Hanako’s car, there was fan about Mr. Sakamoto. He was a member of V6. That’s photo was so interesting. So we laughed all the time. We lost the way, so we wander the Kumamoto city about 1 hour. Asami made original CD. Her choused a lot of nice music. We had not decided at destination, so for the time being we drive for the sea. For a minute after, we found the place about sea bathing. But there had a lot of people, so we through this place. We proceeded to more. At last we reached to Shirathurugahama. The sea was soooo beautiful!! We were so exited. We changed into bikini, then broke into a run to the sea. Nobody had float ring, so we were swim shallow. Every bikini was very very cute. We were swim by evening. On the way to return road, we called at Ai no Amakusa village. There were special a shaved ice. It is famous, so we intended of eating this ice, but it was expensive so we gave up. In return road, we also listened Asami’s original CDs. Lastly, we called at Yume Town Hanasenn. In this shopping mall, we ate dinner. At there, we met Mr. Tomei by accident. We ate Kanameshi. It was so delicious. Beginning to ending, in this tour, we laughed all the time. I love this member and Mr. Sakamoto. I do want to gather again. It is one of the best memory for me in this summer vacation!! 　

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CHEER

2009-10-12T21:54:00.001+09:00

Today, I went to the sea with cheerleading club member. We went to Otathimisaki. We were departure 2 pm.　On the way, we call at Mitinoeki. There were a lot of kinds taste pears. All pears were so delicious. We went slowly, so reached evening. Girls changed to bikini, while, boys blew life rings. We were swim for some time. Water was cold, but very it was very comfortable. On the way, we picked up unknown boys. We lived in friendship, and then we played baseball game in the beach side. Then, we changed to closes and said bye-bye for the sea. We called at spa in our return road. There were so many kinds of ice cream, which were so delicious. We began return again. The last we called at Joyfull. We had dinner. We had happy and delicious time. In returning car, we talked about a lot of things, for example, love, cheerleading, and threat things. I love our team. I got wonderful memory in this summer vacation. Cheers!!
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Europ

2009-10-12T21:52:00.001+09:00

I went to the Europe travel with Misaki in this summer vacation. I have been longing for Europe so this plan was excited me by left Japan.
First day, we gathered at Kumamoto airport, and then we reached to the North Korea airport. This tour had night shopping in Tondemn, but our hotel was so far from there, so bus could not come at our hotel. Sad to say, this plan called off, but Misaki and I wanted to do to the nigh shopping in any way. Therefore we went to the night shopping by ourselves. Mr. and Mrs. Eto, also said they want to go the night shopping, so we went to together. They were very very very vevry nice couple. Mr. Eto was high school teacher of physics. We were so hard to reach Todemn, because taxi driver little speak English. Besides, Korean taxi driver were so violent drive. At length, we reached at there. We were surprised about there, because, there were so brightly. There had so many shopping mall, these open until 5 Am. It is impossible for Japanese shopping mall. We rendezvoused with Mr. and Mrs. Eto in front of big shopping mall after an hour. We run in great hurry. Shopping mall has a lot of so cute item. Our tension raised max. Especially, closes was very cute and very cheap. We bought at will. An hour flashed by. We gave a reluctant good-bye. Actually, return road is also too hard. We could not stand a violent taxi drive. At any rate, I was so happy that we could night shopping in Tondemn. I will go there near future at all cost.
758+278=1036wardes

Kaigai Kennsyu report

2009-10-12T21:45:00.001+09:00

We have a lot of different of tax system Japan from America. Therefore, I paid attention to donation system that is deep related to tax system on American own. We can not see like that system in Japan. This donation system has a lot of variation, so now, I am a university student too, I will introduce a detailed account of donation system to university. What is concerned with tax and donation? Why we have not like that system in Japan? In addition, what caused by this system? Then, I will show you about a lot of point of view this system.
　Now, why tax system nearly to concern to donation system? You know, the “withholding tax “is the root about this system. “Withholding tax “is also exist about Japan and America, but, system is little different. In Japan, we have various income, for example, earned income of salaried workers, individual income of self- employed business owner, interest, allotment and so on. In advance, to pay person deduct about asses on national tax that is decided as the amount. To say in simple phrase, check off of income tax before pay. Then, self business man and pensioner will declare yourself about income and expense. That is to say these are “withholding tax “system in Japan. In contrast, in America, all people have to do about final income tax return. This is the very factor make an original donation system. But, why in Japan, is not system that all people have to do about final income tax return? Now, let’s see about history of “withholding tax “. Actually, there are wars at background. Source of the withholding tax is levy on military budget. So, Japan took in this system at 1940, 4, 1, mimicry by Nazi. Japan has been continuing this system, so if you are not self-employed business owner or pensioner, you do not have to do that final income tax return. In America, does not use this system, so the peoples have to do about final income tax return. Then, I will go to the main subject. Why birth the donation system in America? If you have to do about final income tax return, what the most things about you would like to do? I think that maybe you want to cut down your tax as small as possible. Therefore, this donation system was born. How should we do to reduce own tax? Then, people paid attention to about subtraction. Just about donation to university is the object of subtraction. I will explain this issue in detail. Universities of America are nonprofit organization on legal, so the code is 503(c) that set down by the National Tax Agency. If that NPO has this code, this NPO don’t have to pay income and corporation taxes. In addition, given donation not cost at tax. Then, the most important thing that if you donate to the NPO503©, you can deal with that is as subtraction from your income about the donation’s amount. That is to say, you can reduce income tax by donating to NPO503©, because, your decoration at income get fewer. That thing caused your income get to big. Everybody must increase own income. These thought caused that donation system. I think that American consciousness stronger than Japanese because they have to do financial planning by myself. In that connection, universities of America get round 4, 5 trillions by donation of the nation. (Then, I will little introduce about support amount to university. In America, budget by federal government is round 6 trillions, add, mount outside budget is round 5 trillions, besides, 7 trillions supports by county. In contrast, in Japan, budget to universities 2, 7 trillions by Ministry of Education, Culture, Sports, Science and Technology. American population twice as large as Japanese population, though, I think that there is very large difference mount America between Japan.) There is no end to universities donation, add, alimony subtraction, medical bill, and so on. American has a various ways to reduce taxes by combining these things.
In this way, there are some advantages for receive the donation and give the donation too, so that mechanism was born. Of course, Japanese university is not NPO then there is checking off about income tax, so we have not this system. I think that if we have to final income tax return by myself cause high motivation about tax. I don’t know that this system is good or bad, but maybe it is interesting that trial and error about how increase of own money
. ７５８words

intarlaken

2009-10-07T09:59:00.005+09:00

swissland

nature
water
cow
watch
mountain
cafe
carriage
house
shop
nife
flower
chees
swalofsky
candle
interlaken
U.N
lake
haizi
goat
alpaca
alps
TGV
chocolate

BR2-01 Aesop's Fables

2009-10-07T09:27:00.002+09:00

I love aesop's fables, because this story is very short but it contain a lot of interesting element. I read The Lion and the Mose. This stories mouse is so cute.

Reference
Aesop. (2006.12.20). Eigodeyomu Book 5. Japan: aesop's fables.

writting

2009-09-30T10:01:00.001+09:00

blog handle blog title post title post date URL
1,Tomoko Tomoko mokomoko Portfolio for Writing III Wednesday, July 8, 2009 http://tomokomokomoko.blogspot.com/search/label/portfolios
2Hanako Hanako's blogg Portfolio for Writing III 2009年7月8日 http://hanako0814-hanako.blogspot.com/2009_07_01_archive.html
3Hanae HANAE* Portfolio for WritingIII Wednesday, July 8, 2009 http://pomp0818.blogspot.com/2009_07_01_archive.html
4Yumi yumi Portfolio for Writing III 7/08/2009 http://yumi-miyu-yumi.blogspot.com/2009_07_01_archive.html
5Kumi Kumi's Blog # portfolios Wednesday, July 8, 2009 http://kumi---kumi.blogspot.com/search/label/portfolios

vacation plan

2009-07-19T01:18:00.003+09:00

My summer vacation plan
I have a lot of plan about my summer vacation. First, I am going to go to the sea with my university friends. I love the sea and my friends, so it is looking forward for me!! But, I must be on a diet. Now, I have a hard time losing weight.
Next, I am going to go to fireworks in Tamana. My friend’s Hanako live in Tamana, so I and my friend’s Asami will stay her house. Fireworks in Tamana is very big festival, so I can not wait that!!
I have a lot of plan, above all thing, I am looking forward to travel to Europe with Misaki!! We are going to visit “Korea, England, French, Switzerland, Garman”. Our plan has many sightseeing about world heritage. Especially, Louver is the most diversion for me!!
I will remark this travel’s impression!!

9902+146=10048words

BR-14

2009-07-19T01:01:00.000+09:00

The Lion in Love ・・・from Aesop’s Fables
I read Aesop’s Fables for the first time. This story is so sad. I can not forget about woman’s parents. They are so terrible!! This Lion is very truth and gentle, so they ought to forgive that he and their daughter’s marriage. I think that obediently, gentle and sincerity is the most important, so I can not understand about woman’s parents thought.
Aesop’s Fables has a lot of famous story. For example, The Fox and the Grapes, The Goose with the Golden Eggs, The Lion and The Mouse and so on. The Lion and The Mouse is a good story. Aesop’s Fables has a lot of cruel story, but The Lion and The Mouse is happy story. Aesop’s Fables story is so short at any story so I feel this story is easy to read to even little child. If I chance that I would like to read more stories.

9742+160=9902 words

movie

2009-07-19T00:09:00.002+09:00

Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince

I watched about “Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince” the first day this movie was released with Asami. I was very very looked forward to this movie. I am a fun of Harry Potter. In previous work, Sirius was dead, it is soooooo sad thing for me, but this time, that person of consequence was dead!!!!! I cried while watched this movie.

I felt that this time, love scene is too much. In addition, of you did not read the books, you will not understand clearly. Compare with the books, a lot of part was shaved. But it is so powerful!! The last scene all the time kept me in suspense.

This series, next story is the last. I already read the books, but I feel impatient the next movie.

9606＋136＝9742

BR-13

2009-07-18T14:51:00.000+09:00

Alli Baba and the Forty Thieves
Do you know this story? My answer was “No”. but, maybe you know about this phrase “Open Sesame”. In Japanese “Hirake Goma”.
This story is thieves story, on the way, this contain about cruel scene. And then, content is a little difficult me. Especially, the scene about Morgiana sewed together Cassim’s body is so barbarous for me. But probably, whoever know about “Open Sesame” , so it is probe about this story’s popularity. This story is have about read value by you!

9518+88=9606

BR-12

2009-07-18T11:33:00.002+09:00

The Snow Queen
I read “The Snow Queen”. That is a new story to me. It is written about truth, love and so on. I was very moved!!. Heroin’s Gerda is very pure and lovely girl. Seriously mind about worrying for Kai is so impressive. She go to the river putting on her favorite shoos to exchange between Kai to her favorite shoos, this scene was very stroked me. Kai’s mind is caught by The Snow Queen. Gerda go to adventure to save Kai. The last scene, she save he that she use her tear, I think that this idea is so grate. Maybe, if you read this story you will feel warm. Do try it!

9402+116=9518

BR-11

2009-07-18T10:29:00.002+09:00

Puss in Boots
I read “Puss in Boots”. I heard this books title, but I had not read that. Story was so unique. Head was helped many times by cat. This cat is very smart, so I was so surprised. This cat cheat many people. Thanks to this head got happy life, but I think that this head did not work heard to do, so it is but thing. I feel this story is dear to dream. But it is fiction story and not to hard to read, so maybe it is loved many people. If I can speak to animal, I would like to speak my pretty dog.!!

9293+109=9402

essay1-03b

2009-07-18T00:55:00.002+09:00

Lilo and Stitch

Maybe, all most all the man has family. There are numerous type of family, like there are each of the man. But, how many people deliberate about that they always feel thankful for their family?

Lilo is a little girl. She lives in Hawaii. Sad to say, her parents were dead, so she lives with her older sister. Her name is Nani. Lilo likes image, so she always imagination. But she has no friend. She is always alone. While, Stitch is an alien. He was made by Janba who he is a genius scientist. Stitch did nit know about love, so he destroys everything that he thought.

Trigger of they met was Lilo’s older sister if Nani thought about having a pet on account of Lilo because she always alone. But saying Stitch is a cute dog is physically impossible. Because he is so fierce, add, he destroys anything. But as times go, he gradually come to kind. So he learned about love, friendship, kindness and family by spending a lot of times with Lilo. Stitch could learned about many important things by her.

Stitch say “Lilo is Ohana” in this film. “Ohana” is a ward in Hawaii. This means is family. I think about that we have to cherish own family, because we spend with family at any time. Of course, happy time, then, sad time, sink time, tear time, laughing time and every time we beside with own family. I feel family is my best understand person. I think that family is a small society. We must learn a lot of things from living with family. For example, many kinds of rules, moral, social, money, etiquette, cooking, cleaning and so on. We can grow up thanks to live with family.

Recently, we often encounter the family’s crimes. It is so pity thing. I think about that they should more talk their family before do such a thing. I think that communication is the most important thing about human’s life. We never can make good friendship without communication. Because, human can not understand about other person’s thought no matter it is family. Family is irreplaceable. I believe that family is always ally with you. We should not hurt your family.

This movie will teach us about precious family, in addition to, landscape is also highlight. Hawaii’s views so beautiful, sea, tree, flower and every nature are looks very cheerful. So if you watch this movie, you will get energish. Maybe you will learn a lot of things by “Lilo and Stitch”

8868+425=9293

essay 1-02b

2009-07-18T00:32:00.003+09:00

Japan has a lot of university. Now, the majority student goes on to the university in Japan. Department is also variously, for example, medical, the Faculty of Literature, science, engineering, language, education, commerce, economy, agriculture, legal and so on. So, we can choose the department of any department you like. In university, we can learn more special knowledge.

Recently, many universities are forming some unique department. It looks so interesting. If I can reenter, I would like to sightseeing department, because maybe in this department teach us of a lot of countries culture, manner, sight and so on. Don’t you think about sightseeing is so interesting?

Sad to say, different from other world college student’s study style, Japanese college student have to study so hard to enter the university (what is called war of examination), so when we have enter the university, we feel big liberation and almost do not study hard. Therefore, generally speaking, college students are foolish. My part-time job is cram school teacher of high school student. Looking of them, I feel they do hard study more than university student.

Now, what we have to do college student in Japan? I think that we ought to do more positively. If we do more voluntary, maybe take place active society. College student are so young, but, we have judgment degree all ours’ own. I think that we should be interested in anything, and try earnestly. In addition, we should use time more effective. I feel that university student have a lot of time more any other generation. Time is money!!! We ought to spend fulfill time, and it is also important to have a lot of precious memories. We must watch myself end, and thinking variously future. If every college students do one’s best, Japanese future will bright.

My university life is full so so. When I was high school student, I so want to do play cheerleading, because my sweet friend prayed that it looks so pretty and fantastic, but my high school has not cheerleading club. Therefore, I was looking forward to play cheerleading in university, but KGU had not this club. I possibly play that, so I constitution cheerleading club. Now we practice with Tokai University and the team a member of society. Practice with Tokai University is very fun, while, society team’s practice is very hard. In February, I took part in Japan Cup held in Tokyo. Sad to say, our team lost, but I got precious experience. Concern about study, I reasonably hard to study. I like English absolutely, so I like about any classes. Recently, I am interested in Hemingway’s works. I think Farrell to arms is masterpiece. I would like to read a lot of works written by Hemingway, Shakespeare and so on. My recommendation is “King Lear” and “ Othello” . These works were written by Shakespeare. They are the one of the big 4 tragedy. If you have not read yet, you try to read these works.

The last, I think that pray is the one of the important for university students. A s it things turned out, enjoying is the most important about human’s life. Because of university life, so we have to enjoy greatly. But, be careful about fail credits.

8325+543=8868

1-01b

2009-07-17T02:44:00.003+09:00

To the Host Family

Hallo!! My name is Maki K. Please call me Makky. I’m so happy seeing you. First, I’m introducing myself. Please listen. I’m from Japan. Japan is nice to live in, because almost all the Japanese are very kind and I feel they cherish human relations, so I was helped by many people everyday. Then, I think that Japan is the most safety country.

I have four people family, my father and mother and brother and dog. We often go to restaurant. My father is very gentle for us absolutely also to our cute dog. He go around with dog every morning. Then, he is well-informed person. My mother is so necessary for me!! I consult with her everything about me. She gives perfect advice for me all the time. Then, I feel that my mother’s dish is the most delicious. Especially, I love pizza made by my mother. We often do shopping. But, I and her liking are difficult, so our opinion sometimes crossed. My brother is a growing child, so his appetite is so big. I and he is very friendship. We have fight not at all. My mother and my father lives in perfect harmony. They often have date. Last, we have a sooo cute dog. His mane is Chara. He is 11 years old, so he is senior dog. I love my family.

Then, I have many hobbies. For example, playing the piano, nail art, cooking, watching movies, shopping and so on. Now, I live alone, so I cooking almost all the everyday. My favorite movie is “legally blonde” Do you know this? Heroine’s Elle is sooo positive and glamorous. She is my dream. I think that this movie’s success and Cinderella story is dream for almost girls all over the world. The other day, I watched “ Harry Potter~ a half blood prince” with my best friend. It was so exciting movie. I recommend for you.

Last, actually, I’m a cheerleader. Now, I am a captain in my university cheerleading club. We entered the Japan Cup in winter. Sad to say, we team lost this meeting, but I got a lot of things. I think that I had precious experience. Cheerleading is so fantastic sports, because it gives cheerful a lot of people of course I am also given cheerleading. My team often cheers about J-reag soccer, F-1 super GT, festival and so on. So this time, I want to study and practice American cheerleading.

My introduce fin. If you have some questions, please ask me at any time.

Then, in reverse, may I ask you some questions? In America, I heard that you hold a home party at every weekend. Is that true? I do want to join. In Japan, we have our mother’s cooking. Have you a special cooking about your mother?

Then, please tell me taboos. I don’t know in detail about American culture. Oh! I forget about one important thing. Do you have any family rule? If you have that, teach me. I’ll try to obey. Six weeks is very short for me, but I hope that this opportunity make it for me. Please give me wonderful experience.

7795+530=8325words

BR-10

2009-07-14T01:05:00.002+09:00

Cinderella

This time, I read Cinderella. Maybe, this story is loved all of the girls. This story is famous for the Disney movie, but I was surprised about read this book. Because, story’s content is so different from Disney movie. In Disney movie, Cinderella’s father was dead, but in this book, he is alive. I thought that if her father is alive, he should protect Cinderella!! Then, I was also surprised about this story’s cruelty. Especially, her sisters cut off her foot finger or heel is very barbarous!! But, the last scene is so fantastic. I think that this is the royal road about love story.

7689+106=7795wards

BR-9

2009-07-13T23:31:00.006+09:00

OBAMA’S SPEECH

I read The Speeches Of Barack Obama’s book. This book is so interesting for me. In addition to, this book has Obama’s speech CD, it is very useful. Because, using the CD is benefit for studying English students.

Especially, I was impressed in this book was track 35. in this page, Obama said to gratitude to his family. If my daddy or my husband say that things, I will more love him. I think about that he never forget about gratitude of everybody is one of the point of his victory.

This book contains variously his background. I think reading and listening about speech of person of consequence are very important things. This book is so easy to read and listen. I recommend this book. Try it!!

7560+129=7689wards

essay1-03a

2009-07-12T23:38:00.002+09:00

Lilo and Stitch
Maybe, all most all the man has family. There are numerous type of family, like there are each of the man. But, how many people deliberate about that they always feel thankful for their family?

Lilo is a little girl. She lives in Hawaii. Sad to say, her parents were dead, so she lives with her older sister. Her name is Nani. Lilo likes image, so she always imagination. But she has no friend. She is always alone. While, Stitch is an alien. He was made by Janba who he is a genius scientist. Stitch did nit know about love, so he destroys everything that he thought.

Trigger of they met was Lilo’s older sister if Nani thought about having a pet on account of Lilo because she always alone. But saying Stitch is a cute dog is physically impossible. Because he is so fierce, add, he destroys anything. But as times go, he gradually come to kind. So he learned about love, friendship, kindness and family by spending a lot of times with Lilo. Stitch could learned about many important things by her.

Stitch say “Lilo is Ohana” in this film. “Ohana” is a ward in Hawaii. This means is family. I think about that we have to cherish own family, because we spend with family at any time. Of course, happy time, then, sad time, sink time, tear time, laughing time and every time we beside with own family. I feel family is my best understand person.

Recently, we often encounter the family’s crimes. It is so pity thing. I think about that they should more talk their family before do such a thing. Family is irreplaceable. I believe that family is always ally with you. We should not hurt your family.

This movie will teach us about precious family, in addition to, landscape is also highlight. Hawaii’s views so beautiful, sea, tree, flower and every nature are looks very cheerful. So if you watch this movie, you will get energish. Maybe you will learn a lot of things by “Lilo and Stitch”

348+7212=7560wards

BR-8

2009-07-09T20:49:00.002+09:00

British life
This book was very interesting, so this book taught me a lot of British culture. Especially, I was surprised thing is concerned about marries. This thing is so different from Japan. Compare with Japan, divorce rate, single mother or father’s rate and not be married rate are very high, in addition, many people rising their children, but children’s parents is not married. I do not know that things is good.
Then, I was interested in making about scone. I love scone so much, but I did not know about scone was born is British. Especially, I like maple scone. I would like to make that someday.
7104+108=7212wards

BR-7

2009-07-09T20:26:00.001+09:00

Marie-Antoinette
I think that she is the one of the most tragic woman in the world. Her mother is Maria Theresa. She is the person that jolted over history. She is also concerned in for 7 years war and so on. They lived Austria. This country had fight to Garman, because they want to get Silesia too mach.

Marie got married with Luis 16. This marriage was a political marriage so, I do not think that her life was happy. Maybe, she has a lot of stress things about for her life. Not knowing this thing was true, there is regent story that so big stress made her hair white for only a night.
Eventually, Marie and Luis 16 were killed with French revolution. What did she think the moment about her killed? I hope that she felt happy a little.

６９６３＋１４１＝７１０４wards

Portfolio for Writing III

2009-07-08T09:26:00.006+09:00

Student ID: 08122
[Please replace "08122" (above) with
the last five digits of your student number
(without quotation marks). Then delete these remarks.]

Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1A OR 1C

[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links to blog posts	Dates yyyy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
1-01a (2009.04.08)	essay	2009.4.8	6	241	-	-	-	-
1-01b (2009.04.20)	1-01b	2009.7.17	7	530	-	-	-	-
(1-01c)
1-02a (2009.06.01)	unuversity essay	2009.6.26	6	343	--	-	-	-
1-02b (2009.07.06)	essay 1-02b	2009.7.18	6	543	-	-	-	-
(1-02c)
1-03a (2009.06.29)	essay1-03a	2009.7.12	6	348	1	-	-	-
1-03b (2009.07.13)	essay1-03b	2009.7.18	6	425	-	-	-	-
Totals	---	---		2430

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*	-	-	-	-
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

I didn't know things about british marries, and we don't know about british dculture well comparing U.S.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]
....

3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates: yyyy.mm.dd	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	2007.05.16	39	1
BR1-01	book review1	2009.6.26	144	-
BR 1-02	Book review 2	2009.6.26	163	-
BR 1-03	Book review 3	2009.6.26	94	-
BR 1-04	Book Review 4	2009.6.26	150	-
BR 1-05	BR-5	2009.7.2	125	-
BR 1-06	BR-6	2009.7.2	101	-
BR 1-07	BR-7	2009.7.9	141	-
BR 1-08	BR-8	2009.7.9	108	1
BR 1-09	BR-9	2009.13	129	-
BR 1-10	BR-10	2009.7.13	106	-
BR 1-11	BR-11	2009.7.18	109	-
BR 1-12	BR-12	2009.7.18	116	-
BR1-13	BR-13	2009.7.18	88	-
BR1-14	BR-14	2009.7.19	160	-






---	---	Totals:	1734

Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

Lomeo and Juliet,because it story is so impressing

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?	0
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	0
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	0
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	0
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	0
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	0
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	0
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	0
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)	0
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)		0
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")		0
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BR-6

2009-07-02T15:38:00.000+09:00

Macbeth

This work is also written by Shakespeare and one of tragedy. This is shorter than “hamlet”, “other” and “King Lear”. Story is fighting of Scotland army and Norway army.
Key persons are 3 stitches. Macbeth was trifled with these 3 stitches for a long time.
He was told by her that “ you will not be killed by man that he was born by woman’s the crotch.” But, the person that killed Macbeth was born about Caesar operation. Stitches predict were always truth in this story. I feel so sad. Maybe, I think that Macbeth was very scared about death.

6862+101=6963 wards

BR-5

2009-07-02T12:18:00.002+09:00

THE FAERIE QUEENE

This story was written by Edmund Spenser around 1590. this is the largest romance in the Renaissance of England. I will say contents and form, in this story, there were the queen ‘Gloriana’ and 12 knights. These 12 knights fight to many witch. This tell us to truth and so on. The verse is called Spenserian stanza, quote by his mane.
This story has many old English, for example, cheere , brest and so on, in addition, not known thing that, now, if we want to make PP, we should to add ‘ed’ end the word, but that era, we should to add ‘Y’ the first the word.
This story’s verse is so beautiful. It was very difficult for me to read.

6737+125=6862 wards

weekly typing 13

2009-07-02T11:16:00.000+09:00

Our department was planning about go to America that we will training about English skills, but new flu cause to stop this plan. We are very disappointed, because we are very looking forward to this plan. Suddenly, I have no plan.
i would like to travel a lot if courtiers, for example, Korea, America and French. if I can go Korea, I would like to shopping. Especially, I want to buy cosmetic. Then, if I can go to America, I do want to go Disney world and leangles. America looks so freedom world. The last, if I can go to French, I want to go many world heritages. For example,

6627+110=6737wards

we love stich

2009-06-27T01:26:00.002+09:00

Stich2

Lilo and stich is very cheerful movie. This movie’s stage is Hawaii!! The sea is very beautiful. This movie will teach you about family’s love. First, stich was very fierce, but he learn about many thing by spending with Lilo. When you watch this movie, you will laugh and tear, the last you will think that family is wonderful.
In addition, I would like you to pay attention to lovely stich’s smile. I love his smile!!

6550+77=6627wards

weekly typing

2009-06-26T22:36:00.001+09:00

We have to witting the own blob in witting class. First, I heard that we have to witting blog, i was so disappointed, because, I have little skil about computer, in addition, 10,000wards is also torture about me. But now, I kike witting blog compare with before. Changing letter shape, changing the color and stick some picture is very interesting. i also like about looking my friend's blog. There are a lot of cute blog. Now my blog has almost 6,000 wards. I do want to get 10,000 wards possiblely as soon as

6457+93=6550wards

Book Review 4

2009-06-26T21:49:00.000+09:00

SUGIHARA THIUNE

I read Sugihara Chiune’s biographer. He was Japanese diplomat. He is so famous all over the world, because, he issued so many precious BIZA. In World War 2, he stayed in a Lithuanian. There were so many Jewish. They were suffered from Nazi. If they could not get a BIZA, they will absolutely die. Chiune was in trouble, because he would like to issue a lot of BIZA, but Japan government said that you must not issue the BIZA, so he puzzled. His answer was this; he issued a lot of BIZA for many Jewish. Totally, he saved about 6,000 life at Jewish.
When I read this book, I was so impressed. He said, “I might wrong about diplomat, but I had correct choice about human.” I do think so too.
Again, I confirmed that a war is wrong thing. I hope that there are not wars world.

6307+150=6457wards

weekly typing

2009-06-26T21:08:00.001+09:00

about my keitai
I like my cell phone, because, it looks so lovely. Especially, I think that button is very cute. it is treasure for me. If I lose it, i will so disappoint. in cell phone, there are a lot of memories. Of course my friend, family and darling. E-mail is so variable for me. I read again and again. if i receive happy mail, I protection it. Also, cell phone is very convenient. we always talk to somebody that we want to speak, in addition, if we stay so far each other, we speak partner. Today, we can not live if the cell phone

6201+106=6307wards

Book review 3

2009-06-26T20:53:00.002+09:00

King Lear
This story is also written by Shakespeare. King Lear is one of the big 4 tragedy. Frankly speaking, when I finished read this story, I thought that this story is sooo sad. This story has a lot of humans betrayals. I respect Shakespeare, because, he watch the human’s duty mind to the end, then he using this truly, making marvelous works. If I appear in this story, I want to say “ You must not be pleased about fake an immediate profit” to King Lear.
I recommend to you reading this book.

6107+94=6201wards

Book review 2

2009-06-26T20:09:00.000+09:00

The Canterbury tales
This story was written by Geoffrey Chaucer. He is poemer in England. He is said father of English poetry. This time I read wife of berth. This story has a lot of interesting points. Especially I paid attention to point is that story has a way of thinking feminism.
This story has written in 14 century, nonetheless, that has vintage modern view. I was so surprised, because, it seems as if pioneer about feminism.
In this story, a queen ask a knight this; “what do you think that every women feel the gladdest are done by men?”
This question will also puzzle you, but I think there is another place that Chaucer wants to really tell us thing, maybe, (my prospect) he wants to say it is wrong to judge from appearance.
The Canterbury Tales contains a lot of interesting stories, for example, story by miller, trader, knight, doctor and so on. I would like to read all stories someday.

5944+163=6107wards

book review1

2009-06-26T19:56:00.001+09:00

Romeo and Juliet

I think that there are nobody dose not know about this story about Romeo and Juliet. This is the one of the best tragedy story in the world. This tragedy is caused by family’s war. They have fallen in love with enemy, but their passion love could not stop. They strong persuaded to their parents as they possibly. Romeo’s parents allowed him to marry with Juliet, but her parents never let her do that. Juliet felt so biggest disappointed, and cried all the times. Their tragic disposed priest to help some how. They planed carefully, but ……

This story is famous for the witty remark “oh Romeo, Romeo, why is your name Romeo?”
Shakespeare is so famous writer of tragedy. His big 4 tragedy is also loved many people all over the world. I do read this 4 works close day.

5800+144=5944wards

weekly typing

2009-06-26T18:57:00.001+09:00

Weekly typing gather 1~10

in spring vacation, I went to Tokyo, because i had cheerleading meeting. we had very hard practice for that day. of course, we did not have holiday. this meeting is the first meeting for me. only looking other team's performance, i learn a lot of things.
next day, i went to Disney sea with my daring. that day was so cold. but there were many attractive things so i was so impressived. my daring was very kind

today, i have a first writting class. my teacher is paul. he looks like very kind. hanae is a class too. she is my best friend so i am happy that we are the same class. writting is so hard because teacher send us a lot of homework every week but i will study hard. i pile up a lot of works.. so i have to put in these. blog is very hard for me, because i am li

i like western, j-pop, jazz, and classic music. in classic, especially i love chopin. a learned piano for 15 years, so i am good pianist! add, i have absolutely perfect pitch! in j-pop, a love ayunmi hamasaki. her music is always give me vigor. almost all the her songs, love song, so, these are many enjoymented by a lot of young girl

i have many hobbies. first, i like cooking. so i am cooking and make a lunch for my brother every day. it is hard for me but very interesting. then, I like nail art. When I have some times, I make beautiful nail art. then, I love watching movie. Especially, i like love comedy. legally blond is my recommendation. add, I like reading books. at Japanese writer ,I like mariko hayasi. I feel many sympathy for her works , so almost

I have a lot of plans of GW in this year. First, I have 2 BBQ party. The one is my part-time job member's BBQ party. My part-time job is cram school assistant, so colleague are universities student all of us. We are so friendly. We will hold in Kumamoto university.
The BBQ party will hold my parents house. Neighborhoods will gather.
then, we will go to my mother's parents house in Fukuoka

I　like eating and cooking. I live with my young brother, so I cooking for him every day. He eats a lot of food, so I am so hard to cooking. He said,　my best dish is cream pasta. Nikujaga also delicious my menu.
Then, I love eating. I always eat too much, so i have to lose my weight. Especially.
I like law noodle pasta. Tomato past is the one of my favorite food. In addition, I love
I will tell you that my studying of English styles. First, I read word book, then draw the words many times. Learning a lot of words, you will can read the almost English sentence. My recommendation word book is Target. Next, I read a lot of English sentence for I am accustomed to English. I know that i have to read every day, but i almost can not read everyday. The

I have a lot of classes. Every class wonderful and benefit for me, especially, I like English literary history. In this class, we have to read a lot of popular English literary history. Reentry we reading Shakespeare. I know him, but I did not read his works except Romeo and Juliet. He is the one of the best writer in the world. His tragedy is very masterpiece. Now we read hamlet. Many difficult wards come across in his stories, so we have to use old English dictionary..

I do want to go foreign country. The purpose is study English, sightseeing, home stay, and learn about many think of valuable. especially, i would like to go America and French, because, first, America is a big country so I think if I can go there, I will learn a lot of things, for example, English is absolutely, different from government, commerce, economy and so on. next, I will tell you that why I would like to go French, I learned French when

My favorite movie is legally blonde. This movie makes me so happy. When I in sink, I always watch this movies. I have watched this movie 20 times at least, so I can say her line the first part. This movie's good points are so many. Especially, i think that ell’s smile is the most charm point. She never disappointed. She is always positive thinking. then I want to you attention about this movie’s closes. Her closes always very cute. I fell that maybe

I weak in using the computer, so writing class is very hard for me, but we never avoid using this, i will try. i think computer is so helpful. Now, we can not live if the computer is lose in the world. We feel natural that there are a lot of computers. Especially, i think that personal computer is necessary of human life. of course firm and school for, personal computer is commodity. If we can not use ward and excel, we will may be in trouble. I think that we can use cell phone very

4924+876=5800wards

unuversity essay

2009-06-26T18:49:00.001+09:00

University life

1 Japan has a lot of university. Department is also variously, for example, medical, the Faculty of Literature, science, engineering, language, education, commerce, economy, agriculture, legal and so on.
2 Recently, many universities are forming some unique department. It looks so interesting. If I can reenter, I would like to sightseeing department.
3 Sad to say, different from other world college student’s study style, Japanese college student have to study so hard to enter the university (what is called war of examination), so when we have enter the university, we feel big liberation and almost do not study hard. Therefore, generally speaking, college students are foolish.
4 Now, college student in Japan, what we have to do? I think that we ought to do more positively. If we do more voluntary, maybe take place active society. College student are so young, but, we have judgment degree all ours’ own. I think that we should be interested in anything, and try earnestly.
5 My university life is full so so. When I was high school student, I so want to do play cheerleading, because my sweet friend prayed that it looks so pretty and fantastic, but my high school has not cheerleading club. Therefore, I was looking forward to play cheerleading in university, but KGU had not this club. I possibly play that, so I constitution cheerleading club. Now we practice with Tokai University and the team a member of society. Practice with Tokai University is very fun, while, society team’s practice is very hard. In February, I took part in Japan Cup held in Tokyo. Sad to say, our team lost, but I got precious experience.
6 I think college students have a lot of times, so we can do anything. We ought to spend fulfill time, and it is also important to have a lot of precious memories. We must watch myself end, and thinking variously future. If every college students do one’s best, Japanese future will bright.

Today’s ward is hydrogen
Example sentence
For example, elements like oxygen and hydrogen mix together to from water.

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Typing test

2009-06-24T10:58:00.001+09:00

i like a lot ofsports, for example, soccer, tennis, basketball, volleyball and so on. especially, i love cheerleading. i have been interested in that when i was un high school stydent, because my sweet friend belongs to this club. my high school has not this club so iwas very sad. i decuded to when i enter a unuversuty, i do belong to this club,but KGU had not this club. i do possibly cheerleading, so i made this clun. now i practice with tokai unuversity and team a member of sosiety. in febryaly, i took part in Japan cup in TOkyo.

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PARTY

2009-06-23T23:22:00.001+09:00

Today held Takahashi meeting at the 3d time. This time, organizer was Takuya. We gather at 7, then we went to ‘Doma Doma’. At there, my friend’s Rica working. They served very delicious foods. Especially, I loved pasta using by Udon. Bibinba is also my favorite menu. We talked about works, value of love and do on. We stayed here more 3 hours. Then, we went to second party. We went ‘Jan Jan Go’. There’s atmosphere was so nice. Dark light effluence fashionable space. Annindohu and putting were very delicious.
Mr. Takuya is so enthusiastic soccer fun, so he will go to south Africa for World cup next year. When I heard that thing, I was so surprised, because big money necessary and so far from Japan, but I think completely exciting. I hope he feel enjoy!

Today’s ward is( heredity )

Example sentence ****Simply defined, genetics is a branch of biology that deals with the study of heredity.

4321+159＝4480wards

CHEER

2009-06-23T23:18:00.001+09:00

After school, we had a practice about cheerleading club. Today, the menu were up, flexible, muscle training, dancing and stunts. It is hard for me to teach many things for flesh members. Next month, we have cheer about American foot ball game, so flesh members have to learn to a lot of things by that day. After the practice, we went to “Ide”. Ide is an Okonomiyaki house. This house is near to Shin-suizennji station. I often go this house when I was a high school student. This house’s Kansai style Okonomiyaki is my recommendation. We spent happy tome at there. Then, we had driving!! We went to Aso. All members were high tension, so we sang in the car all the driving time. Driver was Takuhei. His driving was so comfortable. Sayaka is one of our team member, she lives in Aso, so we went to her house. Her parents house in Fukuoka, so she boarding. We talked with her few minutes, then we said good night. We sang again in return road. I spent very fantastic time. I love my team!!!

Today’s ward is volcano.
Example sentence***:because of its shape, it looks more like a volcano than a crater

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KOKEI

2009-06-23T23:16:00.005+09:00

5.15

Today held welcome party of Kokei juku. Kokei juku is the oldest cram school in Japan. I am that school’s graduate and now I work there at tutor. All tutor are college student so we are very friendly. This time, many teachers took part in this party. First, we went to “ken nanahyaku”. That bar served very delicious Japanese food. We ordered courses, that has so variously menu, for example, Mozuku, Kamo, boiled of chicken, sauté of fish, sushi, custard putting, and so on. This likes party, we can learn many things by old teachers. Now, many college students have little chance about talk to expert education, so I think that we have that’s chance is so advantage of us. We spent enjoy two hours time. Then, we went to second party. Next bar name is blue bright. This bar is looks so cool. I wanted to go there for a long time. Drinks were so delicious. Second party took part in many tutors except almost teachers. We talked many things. 4^th grad tutors are so interesting, so we very swelled. We spent most 1 hour, then we went to boring. We tried bit!!! I thought that I am lose no mat6ter what so I was so sank, but what!!!, I won a first prize in that game. I was very surprised and happy! Today broke up. I was spend so nice times.

Today’s ward is “ hemisphere” .

Example sentence ::::: Animals in large part of the northern hemisphere spend every winter fast asleep.

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MOVIE

2009-06-23T22:57:00.004+09:00

Confessions of a shopaholic

Today, I watched a movie with Asami. This title is Confessions of a shopahplic. This moves adaptation of a novel by Sophie Kinsella.

Heroine’s name is Rebecca. She is sweet and charming girl, but, she is heavy shopaholic. She always go to shopping in order to relieve many of her stress. Shopping is the best reward for her. One day, all at once she lost her job. She very sank, but, fortunately, she got a new job that is economy magazine firm. At there, she proposed a lot of original idea point of her view. In a fraction of a second, magazine made by this firm sell like hot cakes. Job is favorable, but her shopahplic is not improvement at all. In the middle, she fall is love. He is her boss. He is so cool and gentle. He is go-getter. They attracted one by one. Just as my though, will they go together?

This movie is my considerable recommendation. Rebecca looks so beautiful, cute and sweet. Addition, Brandon is very very cool guy. When running the end roll, I completely captivated by his coolly. A lot of sweet closes also highlight. Anyway, you will feel interesting when you watching this movie.

Today’s ward is spouse.
Spouse mean, noun a husband or wife.
Example sentence****A parent who has lost his spouse must be both mother and father to the child.

3630+234＝3864wards

TAKAHASHI MEETING

2009-06-23T22:38:00.003+09:00

Today, we had Takahashi meeting at the second time. I was very looking forward to this meeting. This time, the members were Mr. Takahashi, Mr. Nakamura, Ms. Namiko, Takuya and me. This time, I was organizer!. It is very hard for me because, I don’t understand that everyone likes what kinds bar. I like little organizer. We went to bar. That name is “R K T’s” today’s course was we could eat and drink as much as we like. We ate pasta, pizza, flied potato, chicken sauté, and so on. Foods and drink were so delicious. I want to looks slender but today I ate and drank so much.

Ms. Namiko is very interested in soccer, so she almost all talked about soccer. Especially, she love Uchida Atuto. I couldn’t follow her story. Two hours later we went out. Then, we to Japanese foods bar. This bar is Mr. Nakamura recommendation. There’s atmosphere is at home. We ordered some garnishs. All that were so delicious. Mr. Takahashi can hold his liquor, so he went to on drink at syoucyu. We stayed here for 1 hour. Then Ms. Namiko and I went home. Men’s went to some bar. This time, we also spent happy time. I do want to gather again!

Today’s ward****entity
Example sentence***first, there is the hypothesis that language and thought are totally separate entities.

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stich

2009-06-17T02:15:00.001+09:00

Liro lives in Hawaii. She lost her parents, so her sister determine that she present to dog for Liro, but her present is not a dog. It was alien. His name is stich. He is so fierce and often cause about but things. Yet he live with Liro, he learn to gentle, kind mind and marvelous about family.
This movie is ,love story about family. That teach us family valuable.

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university life

2009-05-27T10:29:00.001+09:00

Japan has many universities. A department is various, for example, English, economy, education, medical science, literature, music, legal and so on. Generally speaking, Japanese examination to enter the university is very difficult. Instead, Japanese university student little study until them graduate. I will tell you ordinary university student’s life. 49 wards

2009-05-20T09:58:00.001+09:00

cheer!!

2009-05-20T09:36:00.002+09:00

My university life is so fun! Especially, I enjoy cheerleading club. I’ m captain. Kumamoto gakuen university has 3 member of cheerleading club. Only our team can little things so we practice with Tokai university’s team. Tokai’s members are very kind and interesting. That team has 5 boys member. We are 12 all of member. We has practice together each every Saturday morning. Recently, we can close to big performance, so I am soooo delight. That performance’s mane is 2-2-1!!!

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writting Ⅰ　Ⅱ

2009-05-13T09:40:00.000+09:00

WritingⅠⅡ　
Last year, we were taught writing class by Mr. Robert. His class was so fantastic! Especially, I impressive about letter for my friend in English. The way about writing address is different in Japan, I so surprised.
Then, we were learned about detail of verb, adjective, noun, and so on. Surprisingly, I didn’t know about these details. So it was very serve for me.
We love Robert, so we don’t have his class this year is very sad thing. I do want to learn his class again if I have chance.

3110+95=3205wards

the last day of GW

2009-05-08T15:22:00.001+09:00

5,6 today is last day of GW
I returned my parents home. This day, our family holed the barbecue party with neighborhood. This party would started at 3 pm, so my mother and I went to shopping. My father and brother burned on charcoal. 8 of us in all took part in this party. Meet were so delicious. Talk was very swell. Come to think of it, recently, I have many barbecue party, so I got fat!!!!! but I love barbecue. Of course meet is delicious but I like Yaki Onigiri and Yakisoba!! As many people gather, I feel so happy. Lively is fantastic.
After, my brother and I went to walk with our cute dog. I haven’t walk my country for a long time so I feel good old. After all, country’s air taste was so good for me. GW of this year was very interesting for me.

Today’s ward***erosion***the erosion of the coastline of the sea
Example sentence *** valleys can be formed by the erosion of rivers
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cheers party

2009-05-08T11:24:00.002+09:00

５，５　today is children's day. This night is fleshers welcome party of cheerleading club. We had rendezvous at 7, then we went home. There was karaoke. Dishes were each and every nice. Especially, cheese Harumaki was delicious. The last, they served big strawberry cake. We ate soon!! Karaoke was very swelled. Seniors of men, everybody were good at singing. "shounannno kaze " was so affected for girls. Drink also very delicious so I had much…..of course after I had headache. After that, we went to festa to take a Puricura. 9 of us in all, so in machine was very narrow. Then, fleshers had would like to boring, so we went to center ball. We separated 2 team, we had meeting. First game, I was so drunk, my scare was ….. wow…but after, I had so so scare. My team was win also 2 game. Our team is very friendly, so we had very nice time. After, I got very very sleepy, so I went home on ahead. Maybe other member had more games till morning. Everyone very cheerful. I love our team!! I do want to hold party again. We are number one!!!!

Today's ward****irrigation**irrigation cannels
Example sentence*** artificial watering of land to promote the growth of plants is called irrigation.
2726+214=2940wards

Takahashi meeting

2009-05-07T11:01:00.002+09:00

4, 30, the day was “Takahashi meeting”. Member were, leading character was Mr. Takahashi the first on the list, Mr. Fukushima, Ms. Kaori, Takuya and me. We are colleague. We gathered at 9, then we went “house”. Dishes were very delicious. Especially, I loved pasta. We talked various things. Mr. Takahashi looked like that he was under a lot of stress……
Our age are scattered, but we very swelled up. Also drink were so delicious. After 2 hours, we went this house. Mr. Takahashi treated for us!! How rich man!!!! I was sooooo appreciate for him. Thank you very much. Then Mr.Nagai called us. He was eating dinner with Sayaka. So we joined, because they also colleague. We went to Taigeki to boring. We had 3 games. My score was…………..so but….Sayaka was so nice player. I want to get good score.
This time, I saw the other side of the shield my colleague. After all playing is so fantastic. Also Mr.Nagai and Mr.Takahashi treated us!! We were so sorry for them. Someday, I want to pay for them. The first “Takahashi meeting”was very very interesting. I am glad that if that party someday hold again.

Today’s ward……segment****a part of sth separate from the other part or can be considered separately

Example sentence…. Light foods and beverages are one of the fastest growing segment of the American foods industry.

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BBQ

2009-05-07T10:57:00.002+09:00

The other night, I joined the barbecue party in Kumamoto university. Members were Kokei’s tutor. (Kokei is cram schools mane.) Also, fresh mans were join. Kokei’s tutor like circle, we were very friendly. Senior is very kind, so, I am counseled by them many times. For example, jobs, study, diet and of course love. I haven’t seen them for a long time, so I am so glad for meet seniors. Provision was prepared by seniors. We gathered to this party almost 20 young people, so meet were very very many. The total our expenses 15,000 yen only meet. I was so surprised. Fresh mans were very cute and looks young!! I yearn for them. Eating and drinking was wonderful!! But!!!!! One senior very drunk, so he was drunken…then, he spilled beer on my head!! Oh no!!!
If you have time that you have drink, you should moderately drink. So you might be hated by your friend or family.
Seniors joke were very interesting. They always lead to us a lot of laughing. There is not about such funny part time job member except us. We have various things, maybe almost all the member spent the fantastic time.
I want to say to seniors, “thank you very much about prepare and clean up”

I wish we will have party again!!

Today’s ward.+++anatomy****the scientific study of the structure of human or animal bodies

Example sentense***there is plenty of evidence on the anatomy of the human brain that there are major differences between the sexes.
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My mother's pa

2009-05-07T10:52:00.002+09:00

May 3, my family went to my mother’s parents home in Fukuoka. This week is GW, so freeway was traffic jam. I haven’t seen at my mother’s parents, so I was very looking for meet them. They looks like very good, but my grandmother fell down because cerebral infection so her had better stay on her guard. In addition to, my grand father also in bad health, so I am worry about them. We took a rest, we went to lunch. We just about every time, eat ra-men. Kasuya has very good taste ra-men house. That mane is “Ikkyu”. That taste as soooo delicious as ever. I recommend this with my confidence.
After, we went to mall. This mall called “Diamond city”. This mall was very large!! I was so excited because my favorite bland shops were holding GW super sales. I bought closes and shoos. My mother and father also shopped. Last we take out susi for my grand parents. They looked very happy. It was good day!!

Today’s ward. ****specimen****a small amount of sth that shows what the rest of it is like.
Example sentence***some people like to collect a specimen of each stamp issued by a country.
2046+200=2246wards

Japanese writer

2009-05-07T10:51:00.002+09:00

Now, I will introduce about two people of Japanese writer. First, I will introduce about Haruki Murakami. His works are so fantastic. Stories have not so dynamics but including a lot of metaphor things so that his works many sympathy for many readers. Especially I like about his work is “Dance Dance Dance” This is the one of the masterpiece. The one sheep entrance in this book, he is so mysterious. This sheep is play a serious roll. If you are read his works one time, maybe you will fall a victim to them.
Next, I will introduce about Mariko Hayashi. Maybe, she is the best writer for me. I think that she and I are close to our sense of value, because I identify myself with her novels. That is longing for beauty, rich man, good school background and so on. Her works so attract me, but when I read finished, for some reason or other I feel vanity.
Especially, I like “Tokyo dessert story” This story’s heroine is coed, so I have quiet agree with her. “Nobara”, “Tokyo” also my recommendation.
You should read these two person’s works at all cost.

Today’s ward****fragment+++a small part of sth that has broken off or comes from sth larger.
Example sentence,,,,,solely but surely, he pieced together the fragment of the dream that had awakened him.

1822+224=2046wards

GW

2009-05-07T10:49:00.001+09:00

In the morning, my mother came my house. Then we went out to mall “qurea”. On the ours way, we called at “Taiyaki institute”. There are Paripari taiyaki and Mottiri white taiyaki. We bought 5 Paripari taiyaki and 5 Mottiri white taiyaki. I ate Mottiri white taiyaki for the first time. That taste was likes moti. These were very delicious. After that we reached mall. There were a lot of spring’s new closes. I do want to get spring’s closes, but I have a little money. So I bought a sandal, letter set and note book. After, I dropped in with a cram school teacher. We talked about funny short story. Last, we bought grocery. Recently, I like looking and working around grocery store.
I love date with my mother. The day was so nice for me.

Today’s ward.****vein.****any of the tubes that carry blood from all part of the body to the heart.
Example sentence*****they believed that a vein or never run from the fourth finger of the left hand to the hand.
1648+174=1822wards

SPA

2009-05-02T22:14:00.002+09:00

Today is holiday!!! I am so happy. I love holiday.

My mother came my house in the morning, then, we ate breakfast. That menu was Kamaage Udon! It was very delicious. After that, we went to spa in Kikuthi. We love spa so that we often go to. Kikuthi has a lot of spa. These hot spring is famous for making the skin beautiful. We went Wakuwaku hot spring, there is steam sauna bath. This is my favorite. Then we had lunch. We ate Sushi! I love Negitpro, Ikura and shrimp. I ate too much. From then on, we went my parent’s house. I haven’t seen my dog for a long time. My dog is the cutest in the word. I love him!!!!! I lied back few minutes, then I had part time job, so I went to cram school. Today was so nice day. I love hot spring ,Sushi and my family.

Today’s ward*****dose***an amount of a medicine or a drug that is taken once, or regularly over a period of time.

Example sentence***Although many doctors have injected extra dose of morphine to hasten death, assisted suicide is actually illegal in all states.

1454+194=1648wards

Statue of the woman of my dreams

2009-05-02T19:44:00.006+09:00

Have you statue of the man or woman of your dreams? What kind of the nature you are attracted? I have many women of my dream. Each of them have a lot of charm point. For example, cute smile, keep one’s word at any small, give me serious advice, smart, slender, elegant, devote to something and so on. I am realized a lot of god things by them. In addition to I can mature by talking and exposing to them. I think that if you have the man or woman of your dreams, this is the wonderful thing, because, that thing is the chance at you can come to marvelous person. So I want to find more my dreams person. Then I want to come to wonderful woman.

Today’s ward*****hygiene

Example sentence***The writer thinks hygiene sprays are more dangerous then marijuana.

1313+141=1454wards

spring vacation

2009-04-27T14:18:00.002+09:00

This spring vacation, I got many memories. First I went to Tokyo, because, we had meeting about cheerleading. This is called Japan Cup. So in Japan Cup, a lot of club team gather all part of the country. Our team had soooooooooo hard practice to enter this meeting. Cheerleading looks like flowery but, in fact very hard sport. Regrettably, we were lose but I had so valuable experience. I was very very delighted about dancing and stanting as soak up about spot light. I looked many strong team performance. Only looked their team performance, I learned a lot of things. I will never forget this meeting.

Next day, I went to Tokyo Disney Sea with my darling. That day, it was so cold but, my mind sooooooo happy!!!!!!!!! That is our first visit of a Tokyo Disney Sea. Parade was charming and beautiful. Attraction was wonderful. This thing is one of the most happy thing for my life!! I will go again at all cost.

Next day, I saw my friend in cram school days. Her name is Mica. She looks so cute. We went Ikebukuro, then, took lunch and Purikura!! We ate pasta. It was very delicious. Then, we said bye-bye, because she had a class. Afterward, I went to Shinjuku. I wanted to go to Lumine for a long time. Lumine was paradise for young women.

At night, I had dinner with my darling. We went to very delicious curry restaurant in Ueno. There’s curry was full-dress. Clerks were so kind.
I love Mica and darling!!

The last day, my cousins took me dinner. We ate Susi. My cousins always gentle to me. My sister-in-law is expectant mother. I want she will have cheerful baby.

I want to write more, that is all for today!

Today’s ward 『scrutiny』・・careful and through examination
Example sentence:***Since we are above the tree line, every kind of odd plant receive my scrutiny.
989+324=1313wards

wedding planner

2009-04-27T13:40:00.001+09:00

The other day, I watched DVD in school library. The title is “ Wedding planner”. Recently, I am interested in wedding planner. Do you think wedding planner is lovely job? Maybe wedding is almost all the girls dream. If you can help that dream, don’t you feel happy? I like something creation, suggesting, watching something beautiful things and guidance. So if I come to wedding planner, I will enjoy working. In this movie, heroine is an able wedding planner. Of course, her darling is looks like work, but, one day, she come across special guy of her fate. Unfortunately, he is her special client. So, he is engaged. They are attracted each other, but, their love don’t get along. You are marriage just now, but, are you OK? Who are you true love? You will feel thus if you watch this movie. What do you think that most important thing at marriage? Love? Money? Your sense of value?

Now, I will put new ward everyday to increase my vocabulary. Today is first day!!

*synthesis・・the act of combining separate ideas, beliefs, styles.
Example sentence****Because of the synthesis of days, few of the things we make today are left in their original manufactured state.
784+205=989wards

Handsome suit

2009-04-14T12:40:00.001+09:00

Yesterday, I saw a movie with my brother. The movie’s title is “Handsome suit”. This content is that everyone can be handsome if you wear special suit. This movie, main character, that his name is Takuro, he encounter the suit so he get happy life as handsome, but, is it true that appearance is the most important? If you are good looks, can you get true happy and everything go right? This movie teach us that what is the most important. Looks is by no means everything. After all, heart is the most important. Tenderness, kindness and courage are inspire many happies. Containing many laugh and tear. I recommend you watch the movie. Then, you will happy. “Handsome suit”is worth watching. 663+121=784word

ayu

2009-04-13T12:43:00.002+09:00

Today, I will talk about Ayummi Hamasaki. She is the one of the top singer in Japan. I love her. She is favored by people all ages and both sexes. Maybe many people sympathize with her song. Mainly, she deal with love song. Her CD sell like hot cakes. She has many titles. In addition, her looks attractive too. Her proportion is perfect for Japanese girls. Many Japanese girls imitate her, for example make up and hair style. Especially, my favorite her songs are "Fly high" "Beautiful fighters" and "SEASONS". These songs give me power. As I listen these songs, I will turn to a high spirited –girl even if I feel down. Someday, I would like to go her concert. 541+122=663word

BBQ party

2009-04-11T13:21:00.003+09:00

Today is my home party. Neighbor gather my garden. We held BBQ party. Meets was so delicious. Mother’s dishes is my best. This summer, I will go America. I heard American hold home party every weekend. So I am looking forward to take part in that. I would like to reserve Japanese food. For example, miso soup, nikujaga, tirasizusi, templa and so on. I love eating, so I am afraid of my body get to fat…… I want to know many American food. 541+83=624

part-time job

2009-04-10T15:14:00.002+09:00

Today, I have to go part-time job. I work in cram school. I am a teacher. I am take care of high school student. Mainly, I guide me student in their future. Students study so hard everyday. As looking he and she, I feel that I should mare bear up. Until mow, the most happy thing is my student said me “I love you” ( not amorous.). Every student are my treasure. I hope that no matter little, my advise learn to their help. 457+84=541

practice

2009-04-09T18:04:00.002+09:00

Tonight, I have to go society cheerleading club team practice. Practice is sooooo hard, but, cheerleading is very fun. Contest is 2 minutes 30second. We devote every to this 2 minutes 30 second. We practice 7 hour every Sunday. Ofcource practice everyday. We often cry, but, encourage each other. Then, special performance is made. Someday, I want to learn American cheerleading. 396+61=457

2009-04-09T18:04:00.001+09:00

movie

2009-04-09T17:48:00.002+09:00

９ April

Today, I introduce my favorite movies. First, "legally blonde". This movie is my best. Heroine is Elle Woods. She lives LA. Her parents are overprotective. You know this movie's title, she has blond hair. Then, she loves dress up. At first sight, she is ・・・foolish. She has a smart boyfriend. His name is Warner. In movie, he suddenly dumps her, because he will go to Harvard low school and Elle's looks. She is so shocked, but from now on, this movie's high light. I dare secret continuance. Look at all cost!! You can get energy.

Next is "pretty woman". This movie is royal road of Cinderella story. Maybe almost all the women love that. Especially, I was striked by heroin's one phrase. Heroin is asked "What you want?". She 's answer is "Happy end" I was strangely satisfuctioned by this phrase.

I have many favorite movies, but, today is fin. 241+155=396word

essay

2009-04-08T09:48:00.003+09:00

Hallo!! My name is Maki K. Please call me Makky. I’m so happy seeing you. First, I’m introduce myself. Please listen. I’m from Japan. Japan is nice to live in, because almost all the Japanease are very kind and I feel they cherish human relations, so I was helped by many people everyday.
I have four people family, my father and mother and brother and dog. I love my family.

Then, I have many hobbies. Playing piano, nail art, cooking, watching movies, shopping and so on. My favorite movie is “legally blonde” Do you know this? Heroine’s Elle is sooo positive and glamourous. She is my dream.

Last, actually, I’m a cheerleader. I want to study and plactice American cheerleading. My team cheers about J-leag soccer, F-1 super GT, festival and so on.

My introduce fin. If you have some questions, please ask me at any time.

Then, in reverse, may I ask you some questions? In America, I heard that you hold a home party at every weekend. Is that true? I do want to join. In Japan, we have our mother’s cooking. Have you a special cooking about your?

Then, please tell me taboos. I don’t know in detail about American culture. Oh! I forget about one important thing. Do you have any family rule? If you have that, teach me. I’ll try to obey. Six weeks is very short but I hope that this opportunity. Give me wounderful.

Michael

2009-04-02T15:44:00.002+09:00

I love Michael!!

2006-10-01T09:53:00.001+09:00

Student ID: vwxyz
[Please replace "vwxyz" (above) with
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Portfolio for Writing IV, Section 1A OR 1C
[Please delete the unsuitable class section and the word "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]
(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. OVERVIEW

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. ESSAYS

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links to blog posts	Dates yyyy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
2-01a (2009.10.07)	intarlaken	Wednesday, October 7, 2009	23	24
2-01b (2009.10.21)	Beautiful Switzerland	Wednesday, October 21, 2009	4	102
(2-01c)
2-02a (2009.11.04)	useful unternet	Wednesday, November 11, 2009	3	406
2-02b (2009.11.18)	useful internet2	Wednesday, November 11, 2009	5	495
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2-03a (2009.12.02)
2-03b (2009.12.18/22)
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Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics

M: number of other media included in post

1.2. Most Improved Essay

[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your most improved essay, and explain ways that you improved it here.]

2.0. COMMENTS

Showcase	Short titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*
2.4. Most comments on:	Short titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]
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3.0. BOOK REVIEWS

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates: yyyy.mm.dd	Words	Comments
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Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

[Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

4.0. BLOG LAYOUT, LABELING, LINKING, and MEDIA

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?
4.2. Does your blog display a cloud or list of labels in the sidebar?
4.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ___ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. www (n) xxx (m) yyy (o) zzz (p) ...	---	---
4.3. Links and media	---	---
4.3.1. Do your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics?
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? ___ posts including photos or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? ___ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: ... ... ...	---	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yyyy.mm.dd) for reference. ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date)	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

5.0. ADDITIONAL REFLECTIONS ON YOUR BLOG AND YOUR WRITING FOR IT

Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, selections, and reflections).

6.0. ADVICE AND SUGGESTIONS FOR YOURSELF, YOUR PEERS, AND YOUR SUCCESSORS

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Notes:

This portfolio template derives from Writing Studio Blog templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc (2007-08), Writing III, §§1a & 1c, Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c (2008-09), and the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III.
Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
The essay selection and explanation item (§1.2, above) differs from that in the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III. Please read the new item carefully before making a selection.

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BR2-11 my faie lady

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0.0. OVERVIEW

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

1.0. ESSAYS

Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Wednesday, October 21, 2009

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Wednesday, December 16, 2009

1.2. Most Improved Essay

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Monday, November 30, 2009

2.5. Recent comments display

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

3.0. BOOK REVIEWS

Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Saturday, November 21, 2009

Wednesday, November 25, 2009

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4.0. BLOG LAYOUT, LABELING, LINKING, and MEDIA

4.4. Overall presentation

5.0. ADDITIONAL REFLECTIONS ON YOUR BLOG AND YOUR WRITING FOR IT

6.0. ADVICE AND SUGGESTIONS FOR YOURSELF, YOUR PEERS, AND YOUR SUCCESSORS

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